First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi! I'm Patty and I am learning English because besides (it) being very good and I love it, (it) is the language most often required in the job market. I hope to make new friends here in on italki and learn more with them all. kisses to everyone Sean!

I think you are trying to say English is very good, yes?

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Very good job!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi! I'm Patty and I am learning English because beside my passion to this language  and being very good at it ,i beleive it is the most  requirable language on the job market these days .I hope to make new friends here via italki and learn more with them all. kisses to everyone!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi! I'm Patty and I am learning English because besides being very good at it, I love it. It is one of the most important languages on the job market. I hope to make new friends here on italki and learn more things with them all. Kisses to everyone!