GREEN TEA
Today,I have nothing to do.No studying,no working.Thus I have full time to clean up my table . By accident I find some tea in the drawer.tea in china is popular.there was kind of tea in china.black tea,green tea,oolong tea ,etc.I fonud the tea was green tea .
it was an art with tea .first we should prepare hot water .about 90 degrees Celsius best.and cleaned tea with hot water by tiwce or three times.and then pull the hot water in the pot with tea.remember this process within 10 seconds.at last we could drink which we make the tea .
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GREEN TEA
Today,I have nothing to do.No studying,no working.Thus I have full time to clean up my table . By accident I find some tea in the drawer.tea in china is popular.there was kind of tea in china.black tea,green tea,oolong tea ,etc.I fonud the tea was green tea .it was an art with tea .first we should prepare hot water .about 90 degrees Celsius best.and cleaned tea with hot water by tiwce or three times.and then pull the hot water in the pot with tea.remember this process within 10 seconds.at last we could drink which we make the tea .
Hi,
Your Green Tea story is quite good, just a few corrections needed to express some of your ideas better. Here are the corrections:-
1. Thus, I have plenty of time to tidy (better verb to use in this situation) my table.
2. By accident, I found (past simple tense needed here) some tea in the drawer. Tea is popular in China (I have changed the word order here to make the sentence sound better)
3. There are different kinds of tea in China, for example, black tea, green tea and oolong tea. (Here, this version is a better way to express your idea in this sentence)
4. The tea I found was green tea. (I have changed the word order here to make the sentence sound better)
5. Preparing tea is an art. (I wasn't sure what you wanted to say here so I have written this version). First, heat the water to a maximum of about 90 degrees centigrade (Capital F as it is a new sentence) (Here, this version expresses better the instruction you are giving)
6. Clean the tea twice or three times using the hot water. (Here, this version better expresses your instruction)
7. Then put the hot water into the pot with the tea (Put is the correct verb to use here)
8. Repeat this process for less than 10 seconds. At last, we can now drink the tea. (Here this version expresses better the last part of your instruction).
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