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I has a lot of hobbies. I like going shopping, playing badminton, playing chess, etc. I also like tennis but I have never tried it before. I just see local people or athletes playing in the stadium or on TV. The small green ball looks really cool. Sometimes, I play chess with my brother. He is very good at it. Another activity I do when I have free time is listening to music. I usually listen to US-UK music. Because I think that it does not only improve my English but also helps me relax. Have you ever listened to "Anyone of us", "Save the best for last" or "Diamonds"? They are three of songs I really really love. I love reading books. Especially science books, I like to explore new things around my life. It is very fun. You should try it!!!!!!
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I has have a lot of hobbies. I like going shopping, playing badminton, and playing chess etc amongst other things. I also like to watch tennis but I have never tried it before. I just have, however, see watched local people or athletes playing in the stadium or on TV. The small green yellow ball looks really cool. Sometimes, I play chess with my brother. He is very good at it. Another activity I do when I have free time is listening to music. I usually listen to US-UK music. Because I think that it does not only improve my English but also helps me relax. Have you ever listened to "Anyone of us", "Save the best for last" or "Diamonds"? They are three of songs I really really love. I love reading books, especially science books. I like to explore new things around my life. It is very fun. You should try it!!!!!!All in all not many errors. I have gone into detail as to why I have changed things below in case you would like to look into it further.
The first error (has/have) is due to you using the 3rd person singular form of have instead of the 1st person singular.
When listing with commas it is usual to place 'and' before the final listed item. 'etc' in this context does not sound natural as the list would not be perceived to be limitless. You would therefore use a phrase such as 'amongst other things' to say you also enjoy other activities besides the ones you have mentioned.
'to watch' has been added to make distinct how you like it. 'before' is unnecessary due to already including the adverb 'never'.
I have replaced 'just see' with 'have watched' as this activity has taken place in the past (with present result of you liking it) and should therefore be put into the present perfect tense.
Green/Yellow? - I think the balls are yellow...
I have changed 'listening' to 'listen' as although you still like to do this (in the present tense) you are not doing it right now or having you listening to music interrupted by another action in this story
No need for the preposition 'of' here
Finally, I have added the phrase 'especially science books' to the sentence preceding it as it is linked directly with what was said before it.
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I has have a lot of hobbies. I like going shopping, playing badminton, playing chess, etc. I also like tennis but I have never tried it before. I just see local people or athletes playing in the stadium or on TV. The small green ball looks really cool. Sometimes, I play chess with my brother. He is very good at it. Another activity I do when I have free time is listening to music. I usually listen to US-UK music. Because I think that it does not only improves my English but also helps me relax. Have you ever listened to "Anyone of us", "Save the best for last" or "Diamonds"? They are three of the songs I really really love. I love reading books. Especially science books, I like to explore new things around my life. It is very fun. You should try it!!!!!!Want to progress faster?
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