A interview of the part-time job of accountant Though it is autumn, it is very hot outside. I took bus to Shanghai Gymnasium to take a interview of part-time job of accountant. It was 45 minutes early

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A interview of the part-time job of accountant Though it is autumn, it is very hot outside. I took bus to Shanghai Gymnasium to take a interview of part-time job of accountant. It was 45 minutes early when i arrived and i don't have breakfast. Then i found a dumpling shop which is selling bread,noodle,and dumplings. I asked the waitress for a bread. It was not open when i get to the company. When I was filling in a paper of interview, A girl came to me and sit down opposite to me. But she told me the manager is on business travelling, we must wait for her back to settle down whether hire me or not. I can't believe it. Why do they ask me to have this interview without any manager in so big hot summer yesterday？The point is that it is waste of both time, especially I'm totally wet in big hot day. I have to say it is important to take a good management both in small and big companies. Anyway, I will come here again next week. Because the high fees of Master Degree, I really need a part-time job. By the way, if you run your own business in shanghai, China, I could be your finance assistant. To be honest, I am good at my finance job. And I lover finance. I don't live without finance since I began to learn finance in university，2007. I will start my Master of finance next month. Good luck to me. Thank you for fixing this composition.

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Please revise using the correct verb tenses. You have used the present simple very often, and should have used the past simple.

An interview of for the part-time job of accountant

Though it is autumn, it is very hot outside. I took a/the bus to Shanghai Gymnasium to take a have an interview of for a part-time accounting job of accountant. It was 45 minutes early when I arrived and I didn't have breakfast, but Then I found a dumpling shop which was selling bread, noodles, and dumplings. I asked the waitress for a some bread.

It was not open when i get to the company. When I arrived at the company, they were not open, and when I was filling in a paper of the interview paperwork, a girl woman/female employee came to me and sat down opposite to across from me. But she told me the manager was on business travelling, we must wait for her to get back to settle down to know whether to hire me or not. I couldn't believe it. Why did they ask me to have this interview without any manager in so big on a hot summer day like yesterday？

The point is that it was waste of both of our time, especially since I'm was totally wet in big on this very hot day. I have to say it is important to take have good management both in small and big companies. Anyway, I will come here back again next week, because of the high fees of for a master degree, I really need a part-time job.

By the way, if you run your own business in shanghai, China, I could be your finance assistant. To be honest, I am good at my finance job, and I love finance. I don't haven't lived without finance since I began to learn finance in at university in 2007. I will start my Master's degree of finance next month. Good luck to me.
Thank you for fixing this composition.

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