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Pokemon GO. My smartphone install the Pokemon GO. The games is funny. When you found at the Pokemon, it's exciting.And you need to catching hatching, and more, it's so interesting.But, when you playing a game, you must pay attention to safety.Don't go walking around late at night and faraway.

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Pokemon GO.

I have installed Pokemon Go on my smartphone.
The games is funny.

When you find at the Pokemon, it's exciting .And you need to catching, hatching, and more, it's so interesting .But, when you're playing a game, you must pay attention to safety .Don't go walking around late at night and faraway.

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Pokemon GO.

My smartphone install the Pokemon GO.
The games is funny.

When you found at the Pokemon, it's exciting.And you need to catching hatching, and more, it's so interesting.But, when you playing a game, you must pay attention to safety.Don't go walking around late at night and faraway.


Here is my suggestion on your writing:

On my smartphone, I installed the Pokemon Go game.

The game is so funny!

When you find a Pokemon, it is exciting.  You need to catch it, hatch them, and more.  It is always so interesting!  However, when you play a game, you must keep paying attention to your own safety.  Do not go walking around late at night or off far away. 

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Pokemon GO.

In my smartphone I install the Pokemon GO.
The game is funny.

When you found any Pokemon, it's exciting. You need to catching, hatching, and more, it's so interesting. But, when you playing the game, you must pay attention of safety. Don't go walking around late at night and far away.

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