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Appreciation of the moon
I stood on the top balcony of my house and was busy on moving something at Sunday nightfall. I saw the houses around my house. Almost all of the houses are high and cover the seesight to see the distant place. I used to watch the sky , the cloud, the birds and other distant things like bridges in the distant place when I was a child. It's pleasant to watch the view and you can marvel at the nature's beauty. That night, I saw the sunset turned the clouds became golden and then then a fuzzy crescent moon slowly appeared in the sky. the sky was slowly turned from golden to blue and a little yellow color. The two colors mixed together perfectly. Sometimes we should stop and appreciate the views around us. It's a free gift that can comfort us even when we are in a hard situation. Never forget to appreciate from the heart and you will feel life is also beautiful.Yellow = grammar/spelling
Teal = changed to sound like a native speaker
Lavender = meaning not clear
Appreciation of the moon
I It's always pleasant to watch these views and you will marvel at the nature's beauty. At That night was no different, I watched the sun set, with it's rays making the clouds seemed golden in colour. Then slowly appear a fuzzy crescent moon slowly appeared in the sky. The sky then slowly turned from gold to blue or slightly yellowish in colour. The two colours blended with each other together perfectly. Sometimes, we should stop and appreciate the sights around us. There are nature's free gifts to all of us, and they can comfort us, even when we are having problems in life. So, we should never forget to appreciate them wholeheartedly , and you will feel life is beautiful.
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