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Appreciation of the moon I stood on the top balcony of my house and was busy on moving something at Sunday nightfall. I saw the houses around my house. Almost all of the houses are high and cover the seesight to see the distant place. I used to watch the sky , the cloud, the birds and briages etcs in the distant place when I was a child. It's pleasant to watch the view and you will marval at the nature's beauty. At that nightfall, I saw the sunset made the clouds became golden then then slowly appear a fuzzy crescent moon in the sky. the sky was slowy turned from golden to bule and a little yellow color. The two colors mixed together perfectly. Sometimes we should stop and appreciate the views around us. It's a free gift that can comfort us even when we are in hard situation. Never forget to appreciate from heart and you will feel life is also beautiful.

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Appreciation of the moon

I stood on the top balcony of my house and was busy on moving something at Sunday nightfall. I saw the houses around my house. Almost all of the houses are high and cover the seesight to see the distant place. I used to watch the sky , the cloud, the birds and other distant things like bridges in the distant place when I was a child. It's pleasant to watch the view and you can marvel at the nature's beauty. That night, I saw the sunset turned the clouds became golden and then then a fuzzy crescent moon slowly appeared in the sky. the sky was slowly turned from golden to blue and a little yellow color. The two colors mixed together perfectly. Sometimes we should stop and appreciate the views around us. It's a free gift that can comfort us even when we are in a hard situation. Never forget to appreciate from the heart and you will feel life is also beautiful.


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Appreciation of the moon

I stood was on the top balcony of my house and was busy arranging some of the things there one Sunday evening. I saw looked at the houses around my house. Almost all of the houses are as tall as mine, so I was not able to see far, as my view was blocked. and cover the seesight to see the distant place. But I used to  watch the sky , the clouds, the birds, bridges and many other things in the distance place when I was a child.

It's always pleasant to watch these views and you will marvel at the nature's beauty. At That night was no different, I watched the sun set, with it's rays making the clouds seemed golden in colour. Then  slowly appear a fuzzy crescent moon slowly appeared in the sky. The sky then slowly turned from gold to blue or slightly yellowish in colour. The two colours blended  with each other together perfectly. Sometimes, we should stop and appreciate the sights around us. There are nature's free gifts to all of us, and they can comfort us, even when we are having problems in life. So, we should never forget to appreciate them wholeheartedly , and you will feel life is beautiful.

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