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On the first image, there are many children. They are almost teenagers and they are playing football in the park. A girl in jeans and a blue T-shirt has a ball. Other girls and three boys are trying to get the ball. Everybody is smiling and they are relaxed.
It´s a funny and healthy activity and you can meet people because it´s outside close to the mountain in the Nature.
I think is healthier than the second picture.
On the second picture, 4 girls drink in a cafe. Everybody have a cup of cafe, except one of them, who drinks orange juice.
They wear fashion clothes and they look happy. They are looking at the screen of a tablet or a computer. I´m not sure. I believe it is funny because they are smiling and a good coffee always is good. However, they aren't talking, they are only sitting there and looking at the screen.
(Sorry I could not to add the photos)
Picture
In the first imagen, image there are a lot of children. They are almost mostly teenagers and They they are playing futbool football in the park. A girl, with jeans and blue t-shirt, has a ball. Other girls and three boy boys try to get the ball. Everybody is smilings smiling and they are relaxed.It´s a funny ant and healthy acitvity activity and you can meet people because It´s outside close to the a mountain in nature the Nature.
I think it is healthier than the second picture.
In the second picture, 4 four girls are drinking in a Caffe cafe. Everybody have a cup of caffe coffee, except one of them, who drinks is drinking orange juice.
They are wearing fashion clothes and they look like happies hippies because they are looking a scream look like they are screaming. Maybe a tablet, maybe a computer. I´m not sure. I believe it's funny because they are smiling and a good coffee always is good. However, they are not speaking between themselves, They are only is sitting and looking at a machine.
(Sorry I could not to add the photos)
Picture
In the first imagen, there are a lot of children. They are almost teenagers and they are playing soccer in the park. A girl, with jeans and blue T-shirt has a the ball . Other girls and three boy and the others are trying to get the ball from her. Everybody is smilings and they are relaxed.It´s a funny and healthy activity and you can meet people. because It´s outside and close to the mountain in the Nature. I think it is healthier than the second picture.
In the second picture, 4 girls drink are in a Cafe. Everybody has a cup of caffe coffee, except one of them, who is drinking orange juice.
They are wearing fashionable clothes and they look like happy. because They are looking at a screen, maybe a tablet maybe or a computer, but I´m not sure. I believe is think it's funny because they are smiling and a good coffee always is always good. However, they are not speaking between them. They're only is just sitting and looking at a machine.
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