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A New Kind of Intimacy Emergying Yesterday, while I was walking on the street, I saw a family sat in a bar terrace. They seemed to be the typical family formed by middle-age parents and two teenagers. So far,everything was normal. But there was something in their behaviour that surprised me. There was not face-to-face conversation amongst them! Instead of that, they, including both parents, were chatting away but not each other, because they were only tapping away at their own devices. For a while, I thought there was aconnection issue with them. Didn`t they have anything to talk each other? Had these parents failed teaching good manners and etiquette to their sons?. At the first time I got upset. However, later I thought about to find out more about how to intimacy and social rules are changing as a result of new technologic, smartphone in particular. Therefore, I started googling this topic and I found that, according to Iain Sinclair, British writer, poet, and filmmaker, not only a different kind of intimacy is emerging, which involves checking out device at social events, such as dinner with friends, but also our body is changing toward this new challenge, for example, our neck muscles are changing – to make it easier to look down all the time at our devices. Maybe, it would be sound weird or idiot (A new lamarkism?) now, but not in the long term.

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A New Kind of Intimacy Emergying

Yesterday, when I was walking on the street, I saw a family sitting (outside) on a bar terrace. They seemed to be a typical family, consisting of two middle-age parents with their two teenaged children .Till then, everything looked normal. But there was something about their behaviour that surprised me. There wasn't any face-to-face conversation amongst themselves. Instead ,they including both parents, were just chatting on their phones, without talking to one another

For a while, I thought there was a communication  issue between them." Don't they have anything to about with  talk each other?" I thought, "Didn't these parents failed to teach them  good manners and etiquette ?" 

At the first time , I was in a state of disbelieved. However, I later realised to find out more about how to intimacy and social interactions have been supplanted as a result of by new technologies, in particular, the smartphones.. To understand it further, I started to google about this matter; and I found , according to Iain Sinclair, a British writer, poet and filmmaker, that there is also  a recent emergence of a different of emotional attachments to technologies: the checking of one's communicative devices at social events such as dinner with friends. However, our body is adapting itself to this new habit, for example, our neck muscles are more adapted to  – to make it easier to look down all the time at our devices now. Maybe, it might be sound weird or idiotic (A new lamarkism?) now, but not in the long term.

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A New Kind of Intimacy Emergying

Yesterday, while I was walking on the street, I saw a family sitting on a bar terrace. They seemed to be the typical family formed by middle-age parents and two teenagers. So far,everything was normal. But there was something in their behaviour that surprised me. There was not face-to-face conversation amongst them! Instead of that, they, including both parents, were chatting away but not with each other, because they were only tapping away at their own devices. For a while, I thought there was a connection issue with them. Didn`t they have anything to talk each other about? Had these parents failed teaching good manners and etiquette to their sons? At the first time I got upset. However, later I thought about to find out more about how to intimacy and social rules are changing as a result of new technology, smartphones in particular. Therefore, I started googling this topic and I found that, according to Iain Sinclair, British writer, poet, and filmmaker, not only a different kind of intimacy is emerging, which involves checking out device at social events, such as dinner with friends, but also our body is changing toward this new challenge, for example, our neck muscles are changing – to make it easier to look down all the time at our devices. Maybe, it would be sound weird or idiot (A new lamarkism?) now, but not in the long term.

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Sometimes,it's really make our life easier. We can talk with friends or families thousands kilometers away anytime immediately. however,I feel lonely when a crowd friends have dinner together,everyone hold smartphone, taking pictures or texting with others. No one realizes the behavior ignores the people who are sitting besides him or her.

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