Polical situation: what about your country?
Good morning friends,
I want to write this notebook for telling a little about the political situation in my country.
First thing, now we are passing a transition because of the entry of the new president Pedro Pablo Kuczingsky (People here call him as PPK). One month ago, our Peru was divided between two political tendencies: something like democratic left and neoliberalism. It was the first time here in our country two women was fighting by the power. This women are Veronica Mendoza (a sociolgist representant of the left) and Keiko Fujimoti (daughert of the most corrupted president of my country Aberto Fujimori, who is now incarcelled).
In the second round of elections, the news and media and the ortodoxical politics had made a dirty campaing against Veronica Mendoza, and she went losting votes. As a result, Keiko Fujimori ascended (She counted with a multimillionay campaign) and our country runk the risk of the return of Fujimorismo.
Fortunatelly, almost all the different political parties joined their forces and PPK gained the elections.
This have conduced to reducing the political tension and the uncertain in our economy, but there are a lot of challenges to cover, as the educational reform and the improve of our markets.
Sorry if i were a little extensive :), and i will be so grateful with your corrections, and also interested about the political situation in your country.
Kisses!
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Polical situation: what about your country?
Good morning friends,I want to write this notebook for telling to tell you a little about the political situation in my country.
First thing, now we are passing in a transition because of the entry of the new president Pedro Pablo Kuczingsky (People here call him as PPK). One month ago, our Peru was divided between into two political tendencies: something like democratic left and neoliberalism. It was the first time here in our country two women was were fighting by the for power. This These women are Veronica Mendoza (a sociolgist representantative of the left) and Keiko Fujimoti (daughter of the most corrupted president of my country Aberto Fujimori, who is now incarcelled). incarcerated/ in prison (for _________)
In the second round of elections, the news and media and the orthodoxical politics had made a dirty campaing against Veronica Mendoza, and she went losting losing votes. As a result, Keiko Fujimori ascended (She counted with a multimillionay dollar(?) campaign) and our country runk runs the risk of the return of Fujimorismo.
Fortunatelly, almost all the different political parties joined their forces and PPK gained the elections.gained votes (?)
This have has conduced to reducing the political tension and the uncertain in our economy, but there are a lot of challenges to overcome cover, as the educational reform and the improve of our markets.
Sorry if i were was a little extensive :), and i will be so grateful with your corrections, and also interested about the political situation in your country.
Kisses!
Hi Ludy,
Well done. You just made some careless mistakes that I'm sure you know the correct way to write it, you just made a mistake. Be very careful about that in important writings.
Specific things to study:
- 3rd person verbs (have/has)
- past tense
- spelling
As for my country, I'm from the USA. I'm sure you know about our political situation and our election. The two leading candidates are crazy, which makes for an interesting and scary time. I hope it will all work out well.
Keep up the good work!
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