,SHALL I USE THE ELECTRONIC PRODUCTS？(PLEASR CORECT THOSE SENTENCES)
I am in high school now and I must study hard to make my dream come true, but when I use the smart phone ,I will lose myself in playing games or reading novels.It take me much time to use the smart phone.I will feel repentant after I use the smart phone,how can I deal with this problem.I ask my parents to hide the mobile phone , to their surprise,I begin to play the computer afrter I finish my homework,.This make me feel terrible.Each time I use the electronic products,I usually spend a lot of time in playing them, As a result, I have little to read books.I want to ralax myself by reading books,but my bad habits greatly influent me,do Do you have some advice , please tell me.
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SHALL I USE THE ELECTRONIC PRODUCTS DEVICES？(PLEASE CORRECT THESE SENTENCES)
I am in high school now and I must study hard to make my dream/dreams (we often say dreams, but dream is ok) come true, but when I use the my smart phone ( smart phone is correct, but young people usually say phone) ,I will lose myself in will distract myself playing games or reading novels. I waste a lot of time on my phone It takes me much time to use the smart phone.I will feel repentant guilty after I use the my smart phone.How can I deal with this problem? I asked my parents to hide the my mobile phone and to their surprise,I began using my computer after I finished my homework instead.This makes me feel terrible.Every time I use electronic products devices,I usually spend a lot of time on them, As a result, I have little to no time to read books.I want to relax myself by reading books,but my bad habits greatly influence me. Do you have any advice? If so, please tell me.Good writing! keep up the good work!
Sorry, I don't have much advic for you. Just remember what your goals are and remember that letting electronic devices distract you, will stop you from achieving your goals!
good luck!
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