15. Sun Aug 7th * At the beach *
Hi everyone!
It´s my fifteen note on Italki. I am very happy! I have to continue practicing a lot.
Well, today I went to the beach with my friends and my sister and cousins. It was great!
We went in the Rachel's car. My cousin Johnny drove for an hour until that we arrived. We love go to the beach.
The sea is so beautiful. We swiming all the afternoon. We also enjoyed a delicious food.
My sister loves seafood, she eats a lot.
Johnny and Mary drive a jet skis. They were very fun. I didn't want to drive a jet skis because I was afraid.
I prefered swiming with my sister and other friends.
We come back at home around 7:00 pm.
It was a beautiful weekend!
See you soon!
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15. Sun Aug 7th * At the beach *
Hi everyone!It's my fifteenth note on Italki. I'm very happy but I still have to continue practicing a lot.
Well, today I went to the beach with my friends, and my sister and my cousins. It was great!
We went in the Rachel's car. My cousin Johnny drove for an hour until that we arrived to get there. We love to go to the beach.
The sea is so beautiful. We went swimming all the afternoon and we also enjoyed a delicious food.
My sister loves seafood and she eats a lot.
Johnny and Mary drive a rode jet skis They were very and had a lot of fun. I didn't want to drive ride a jet skis because I was afraid. (Es más natural de decir "But I was too afraid to ride the jet ski.")
I prefered swiming with my sister and my other friends.
We come came/arrived/got back at home around 7:00 pm.
It was a beautiful weekend!
See you soon!
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15. Sun Aug 7th * At the beach *
Hi everyone!It´s my fifteenth note on Italki. I am very happy because I have been practicing a lot.
Today I went to the beach with my friends, my sister and my cousins. It was great!
We went in Rachel's car. My cousin Johnny drove for an hour until that we arrived to the place. We love to go to the beach.
The sea is so beautiful. We were swimming all afternoon. We also enjoyed some delicious food.
My sister loves seafood, she eats it a lot.
Johnny and Mary drove a jet skis. They (jet skis) looked that they were very fun. I didn't want to jet ski because I was afraid.
I prefered swiming with my sister and other friends.
We came back at home around 7:00 pm.
It was a beautiful weekend!
See you soon!
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