My first trial essay (formal way)
The most of industrialized countries in the world are unjustifiably damaging the environment. This is a fact which concerns all countries but not all of them are handling it properly.
Some years ago countries reached treatments about environment protection. Despite the fact that there is an international law about water pollution, not all countries that signed the protocol are now respecting it. The industrial sector, which is the main responsible of rivers and sea pollution, has a lot of influence in politics, which means that they get some protection of breaking the rules.
We have also issues with transport pollution. Most crowed countries are producing a lot of CO2 beacuse of transport. There are big problems to breath healthy air on big cities, which means that people get sick beacuse of this. Governments are taking it into consideration but still we have a lot of things to do.
Though the pesimist reality, I am really sure we can change it. We are all getting aware about this huge problems and despite we have not solved the most of them we are on the road to do it.
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My first trial essay (formal way)
The most majority of industrialized countries in the world are unjustifiably damaging the environment. This is a fact which concerns all countries, but not all of them are handling it properly.Some years ago countries reached treatments agreements about environment protection. Despite the fact that there is an international law about water pollution, not all countries that signed the protocol are now respecting it. The industrial sector, which is the mainly responsible of for rivers and sea pollution (or you could say "which is the main culprit behind river and sea pollution"), has a lot of influence in politics, which means that they can get away with some protection of breaking some of the rules.
We have also also have issues with transport pollution. Most crowed countries are producing a lot of CO2 beacuse because of transport. There are big problems to with being able to breath healthy air on in big cities, which means that people get sick beacuse because of this. Governments are taking it into consideration, but still we have a lot of things to do.
Though the pesimist reality (I don't think reality can be pessimistic, only people..you could say, "Though the reality of this situation looks bleak,"), I am really sure we can change it. We are all getting becoming aware of about this these huge problems and despite the fact that we have not solved the most of them, we are on the road to do it so.
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