A raining day
Today,it is really hot outside and supreme temperature is 37 degree.But in the afternoon,the sky gradually grow dark.I knew it is going to rain.Though it was rain outside,finally,i decided to go to the library.In the library,i read an article about whether police can search the contents of a mobile phone without a warrant if the phone is on or around a person during an arrest.
The article is really difficult for me to read,i had to search the words i didn't know.It cost me at least half hour to finsh the article.So,it is my first English diary,maybe not easy to read.
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A Rainy day
Today, was really hot outside, with a high temperature of 37 degrees. In the afternoon, the sky gradually grew dark, so I knew it was going to rain. Even though, it was raining outside, I decided to go to the library. In the library, I read an article about whether police can search the contents of a mobile phone, without a warrant, if the phone is on or around a person during an arrest.The article was really difficult for me to read because I had to search for the words that I didn't know. It cost/took me at least half an hour to finish the article. This is my first English diary, so it may not be easy to read.
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A raining day
Today, it is really hot outside and supreme the temperature is 37 degree. But in the afternoon, the sky gradually grow dark. I knew it is going to rain.Though it was raining outside,finally, I decided to go to the library. In the library, I read an article about whether police can search the contents of a mobile phone without a warrant if the phone is on with or around a person during an arrest.The article is really difficult for me to read, I had to search the words I didn't know. It cost me took my at least half an hour to finish the article. So, it is my first English diary, maybe not easy to read.
It is easy to read.
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