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Historical buildings teared down. I have seen a lot of buildings to be teared down lately because of the wear. You will probably think there is nothing wrong with it, however those buildings teared down were part of the history of our city and also of our country. My question is, wasn´t there enough money to preserve them? Or is our goverment so careless that allow shattered such an important part of our culture without trying anything to keep them well-kept? I´ve been hearing some news lately talking about the insufficient public funds to preserve those sightseens and I got really frustated, to such an extent that I wrote an article and I sent it to an important newspaper. In summarize, what I tryed was to galvanize in order no to repeat the same horrible actions in the future. Therefore I came up with a plan to make our historical buildings more profitables. For instance, when it comes to cultural activities those kinds of buildings are the most suitables to hold them, and people would pay a little fee to enter them and enjoy some paintings, estatues, music events etc., in such a way that some part of the money collected could be used to keep the building in perfect conditions. Besides this, some historical buildings could be used to hold classes, groceries stores and even houses for people to dwell. That way we would save a lot of money and in the meantime those buildings would be used and there would be less demand of bulding new buildings. We would make the most of the free space there is in the city and at the same time a lot of people could set up their bussineses in those buildings without paying too much money for renting facilities. Those buildings have been part of our life and I would like that my offsprings enjoyed those places as much as I did. We can´t afford to lose them forever. Would you be able to imagine Egypt without the pyramids, India without The Thaj Majhal or París without the Eiffel Tower? To some extent, those buildings stand for our city and our country as much as our flag, therefore we should take care of them and let our sons and nephews enjoy them as we did.

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Historical buildings teared torn down.

I have seen a lot of buildings to be teared being torn down lately because of the wear. You will probably may think there is nothing wrong with it. However, those buildings teared down were are part of the history of our city and also of our country. My question is, wasn´t there enough money to preserve them? Or is our goverment so careless that it allows shattered such an important part of our culture to be destroyed, without trying anything to keep them well-kept? up.

I´ve been hearing some news lately talking about the insufficient public funds being available to preserve those sightseens structures. and I got really frustated, I was frustrated to such an extent that I wrote an article and I sent it to an important a well-known *1 newspaper. In summarize, what I tryed was to galvanize in order no to repeat I wanted to galvanize the public so that the same horrible actions would be prevented in the future. Therefore I came up with a plan to make our historical buildings more profitables. self-sustaining. For instance, when it comes to cultural activities those kinds of these buildings are the most suitables to hold them, and very suitable for cultural activities. People would pay a little small fee to enter them and enjoy some paintings, estatues statues, music events, etc.  in such a way that some Part of the money collected could be used to keep the building in perfect conditions condition.

*1 'important' doesn't fit here, and I'm not sure of what your meaning was.

Sorry, but I don't have time to finish the rest.  It's a great article.  Your meaning, in most cases, is very clear and well-articulated.


Besides this, some historical buildings could be used to hold classes, groceries stores and even houses for people to dwell. That way we would save a lot of money and in the meantime those buildings would be used and there would be less demand of bulding new buildings. We would make the most of the free space there is in the city and at the same time a lot of people could set up their bussineses in those buildings without paying too much money for renting facilities.

Those buildings have been part of our life and I would like that my offsprings enjoyed those places as much as I did. We can´t afford to lose them forever. Would you be able to imagine Egypt without the pyramids, India without The Thaj Majhal or París without the Eiffel Tower? To some extent, those buildings stand for our city and our country as much as our flag, therefore we should take care of them and let our sons and nephews enjoy them as we did.


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Historical buildings teared down.

I have seen a lot of buildings to be which were teared down lately because of the wear depreciation.  You will probably think there is nothing wrong with it, however, those buildings teared down were historical part of the history of our city and also of our country. My question is, wasn´t there enough money to preserve( reconstruct) them? Or is our goverment is so careless that allow to shattered such an important part of our culture without trying anything to keep them well-kept?

I´ve been hearing heard some news lately talking about the insufficient public funds to preserve those sightseeings and. I got really frustated, to such an extent that I wrote an article and I sent it to an important newspaper. To summarize, what I tryed was to galvanize any actions in order no to repeat the same horrible actions in the future. Therefore I came up with a plan to make our historical buildings more profitables. For instance, when it comes to cultural activities those kinds of buildings are the most suitables to hold them, and that is why people would pay a little fee to enter them and enjoy some paintings, estatues, music events etc., in such a way that some part of the money collected money could be used to keep the buildings in perfect conditions.

Besides this, some historical buildings could be used to hold classes, groceries ,stores and even houses for people to dwell. That way we would save a lot of money and in the meantime those buildings are used and there would be less demand of bulding new buildings. We would make save the most of the free space there is in the city and at the same time a lot of people could set up their bussinesses in those buildings without paying too much money for renting facilities.

Those buildings have been part of our life and I would like that my offsprings enjoyed those places as much as I did. We can´t afford to losing them forever. Would you be able to imagine Egypt without the pyramids, India without The Thaj Majhal or París without the Eiffel Tower? To some extent, those buildings stand for  represent our city and our country as much as our flag, therefore we should take care of them and let our sons and nephews enjoy them as we did.

P.S Great job! I enjoyed reading your text!


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