Transportation
To the government officers,
In recent years, haze weather becomes very common. And it seriously does harm to people’s health. Air pollution and noise pollution are getting worse. What mainly causes these is a large number of the cars. So I propose you to make some rules to limit people to buy the cars and improve the public transportation. And you can complete the bus system and increase the number of public bicycles. I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and take more real actions to solve it.
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Transportation
To the government officials,
In recent years hazy weather is becoming very common due to increased air pollution. This is a serious threat to people's health. Air and noise pollution are both mainly caused by cars. To combat this problem, I propose you make rules to limit (the number of cars? the type of cars?) people buy and improve public transportation. Additionally, finishing implementation of the bus system and increasing the number of public bicycles will help reduce car traffic. I encourage you to pay attention to this problem and take some real actions to reduce the air and noise pollution in our community.
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