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I love China China is an eastern country with a long history .It covers a huge area and has the largest population in the world . Chinese language is the most unique one .Each character has its meaning and it's really a challenge to learn Chinese .Calligraphy is another expression of the language .Different styles of handwriting can be shown differently . Two long rivers run across China :the Yellow River and the Yangtze River .Chinese civilization developed from them .They wind across China like a huge dragon and provide convenience for shipping and hydro power . It will take a long time if you want to visit all the places in China .Because of regional differences ,different parts of China are entirely different from each other .For example ,Beijing is the symbol of Chinese history .Shanghai is a developed metropolitan .While Xinjiang is a representation of ethnic minorities . China is my mother land and I am proud of being a Chinese .

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I love China. China is an eastern country with a long history. It covers a huge area and has the largest population in the world.

Chinese language is the most unique one .Each character has its meaning, and it's really a challenge to learn Chinese .Calligraphy is another expression of the language .Different styles of handwriting can be shown differently .
Two long rivers run across China:the Yellow River and the Yangtze River .Chinese civilization developed from them .They wind across China like a huge dragon and provide convenience for shipping and hydro power .
It will take a long time if you want to visit all the places in China .Because of regional differences ,different parts of China are entirely different from each other .For example ,Beijing is the symbol of Chinese history, and Shanghai is a developed metropolitan, while Xinjiang is a representation of ethnic minorities .
China is my mother land, and I am proud of being a Chinese .

(You're very good! I didn't correct this every time you did it, but you don't need to put a space between a letter and the period at the end of the sentence.)

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I love China

China is an Eastern country with a long history. It covers a huge area and has the largest population in the world. Chinese language is the most unique one language. Each character has its own meaning and it's really a challenge to learn Chinese. Calligraphy is another expression of the language. Different styles of handwriting can be shown differently.
Two long rivers run across China:the Yellow River and the Yangtze River. Chinese civilization developed from them. They wind across China like a huge dragon and provide convenience for shipping and hydro power.
It will take a long time if you want to visit all the places in China because (try not to start sentences with "Because") of regional differences. Different parts of China are entirely different from each other. For example, Beijing is the symbol of Chinese history, while Shanghai is a developed metropolitan, and Xinjiang is a representation of ethnic minorities.
China is my mother land and I am proud of being a Chinese.

Also, make sure to remove the space between the ends of sentences and the periods. Spaces should occur only before a new sentence.

You're doing a great job!! :-) I enjoyed reading this, especially the part about Chinese rivers forming the shape of a dragon! Nice imagery.

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I love China

China is an eastern country with a long history .It covers a huge area and has the largest population in the world .
The Chinese language is the most unique. one Each character has its own meaning and it's really a challenge to learn Chinese .Calligraphy is another expression of the language .Different styles of handwriting can be shown differently .
Two long rivers run across China :the Yellow River and the Yangtze River .Chinese civilization developed from them .They wind across China like a huge dragon and provide convenience for shipping and hydro power .
It would take a long time if you wanted to visit all the places in China  because of regional differences ,Different parts of China are entirely different from each other .For example ,Beijing is the symbol of Chinese history .Shanghai is a developed metropolitan .While Xinjiang is a representation of ethnic minorities .
China is my mother land and I am proud of being a Chinese .

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