We are all birds.
Birds ,as you know they can fly freely and casually in the sky .However when they are put in the birdcage,the situation changes.
Food is plenty for them but freedom are not present.Sometime ,I imagine we personkind are alike as them.
Our house are decorated with protecting net in the window and in the balcony.
Now you can see we seem to be living in the birdcage.
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We are all birds.
Birds ,as you know they can fly freely and casually in the sky .However when they are put in the birdcage,the situation changes.Food is plenty for them but freedom are not present.Sometime ,I imagine we personkind are alike as them.
Our house are decorated with protecting net in the window and in the balcony.
Now you can see we seem to be living in the birdcage.
Very nice work. I can tell you are careful with spelling and that you are a person who thinks poetically. That shows even in a new language! I only want to comment on two things, which are important.
1. Freedom is. House is. (Or houses are.) The verb "to be" is irregular in (almost) every language. Its tricky. And it is different if you have one thing (singular) in the subject or more than one thing (plural). For one thing, it is and for more than one thing, they are.
My hat is red. My shoes are blue.
2. Personkind is not a word. Humankind or mankind would be correct here. And to make your singular/plural issue more complicated, it is a collective singular. In other words all these humans come together to make one collection of humans, humankind. Humankind is like them.
I don't speak Chinese, but I'm guessing the issue lies more with the singular/plural/collective aspect, since some Asian languages don't count singular/plural like English does. So one item/person/idea is singular. If you have more than one, plural. If you have a group, the group is what counts not the parts of the group, so that works like its singular.
Excellent work! Thanks for sharing your poetic writing!
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We are all birds.
Birds ,as you know (they) can fly freely and casually in the sky .However, when they are put in the birdcage, the situation changes.There Food is plenty of food for them, but freedom is lacking/missing/are is not present.Sometimes , I imagine, we personmankind are alike as them.
Our houses are decorated with a protectiveng net in the window and in on the balcony.
Now you can see that we seem to be living in the birdcage.
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