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Breakdancing Hi, thank you always for reading my notebook, correction and comment! I'm so happy because everyone is so kind toward me. To use italki and talk with foreign friends on Skype are becoming one of my hobbies. (^^) Today's my topic is about my hobby. My hobby is a breakdancing that is known as one of street dancing. You may imagine that dancing is supposed to dance with person standing. However, in the breakdancing, dancer dances while not only standing but also getting hands, elbow, back or head on the floor. There are skills such as stepping foot while getting hands on the floor (called footwork), spinning by using back or head (called backspin and headspin) and one handstanding (i.e., handstand by using only one hand) in the breakdancing. I think that the breakdancing is more difficult than others street dancings in the beginning because it is not easy to master each skill. However, you will feel it is very interesting if you can master something of skills. I feel so happy when I mastered a new skill by practicing a lot. Please try the breakdancing if you are interested in. p.s. I feel that my sentence is always constructed by the same syntax. Do you feel my sentence is childish? (><) ---------- New expressions in English for me (e.g., word, idiom, grammar...etc); 1. it is becoming ~: それは〜になりつつある 2. imagine: 想像する 3. be supposed to do ~: 通常〜するものである 4. do with A ~ing: Aが〜しながら〜する<with+名詞+補足する語> 5. in the beginning: 初めのうちは 6. if you are interested in: もし興味があれば 7. childish: 稚拙な

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Breakdancing

Hi, thank you for always  reading my notebook, for your corrections and your comments!
I am very happy because everyone is so kind toward me. To use italki and talk with foreign friends on Skype is becoming one of my hobbies. (^^)

My topic today is about my hobby. My hobby is a breakdancing which is a part of the street dancing genre.
Usually, dance is performed while standing. However, in  breakdance, the dancers also get on their hands, elbow, back or head on the floor. There are skills such as stepping on the foot while getting hands on the floor (called footwork), spinning on the back or the head (called backspin and headspin) and one hand standing (i.e., handstand by using only one hand) in breakdancing.
I think that breakdancing is more difficult than other street dances in the beginning because each individual skill has to be mastered, which is not easy. However,  it is very interesting if one can master even some of the skills. I feel so happy when I master a new skill by practicing a lot. Please try breakdancing if you are interested in it.

p.s. I feel that my sentences are always constructed by the same syntax. Do you feel my sentences are childish? (><)

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New expressions in English for me (e.g., word, idiom, grammar...etc);
1. it is becoming ~: それは〜になりつつある
2. imagine: 想像する
3. be supposed to do ~: 通常〜するものである
4. do with A ~ing: Aが〜しながら〜する<with+名詞+補足する語>
5. in the beginning: 初めのうちは
6. if you are interested in: もし興味があれば
7. childish: 稚拙な

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