Pokemon GO

The Pokemon GO app has become a huge global phenomenon since its release last month, with more than 75 million downloads. Everybody is talking about it, and a lot of them are angry with it; they find the app annoying and they criticize the people who play it. Come on!
When you say ‘These people are wasting their time playing this stupid game, trying to catch a virtual animal, and instead they should spend time doing…’ I’m sorry, but aren’t you wasting your time criticizing people and talking about an app?
Please stop sharing the Einstein’s photo which says “I fear the day that technology will surpass our human interaction. The world will have a generation of idiots.” First because there’s absolutely no evidence that Albert Einstein ever said this; and secondly when you are sharing this photo in the social networks, aren’t you using technology as well? Maybe while you were so angry sharing this thought, another person was talking to you and you didn’t listen because you were so worried about people who play Pokemon GO. Haha.

If they are happy playing with it… let them be.

Smile and be happy. :D :D :D

This is a great entry and I just made a few corrections:

1) The Pokemon GO app - this just makes it clearer what you are talking about, with your title is not necessary, but it is a good idea to keep things clear of what item, or person you are talking about.

2) ; or , - this is very subtle and either one can be correct. If you pause when saying it, you would normally use a semicolon.

3) First because there’s absolutely no evidence that Albert Einstein ever said this; and secondly - Instead of saying "At first" just say "First" and then in the second part use "and secondly"

You have a great command of the English language already!