July 06/2016 Wednesday
If you're ugly, I'm ugly too
In your eyes the sky's a different blue
If you could see yourself like others do
You'd wish you were as beautiful as you, Yeah [emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]
This song is so cute *-*
Today I got up at 7:00 a.m., it's good for enjoying more my day, I like it. By the way I have to go to center city to resolve some things again.
I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face. Then I went to the kitchen to have my breakfast, I ate bread with cheese and I drank coffee. I love to eat bread with smashed cheese, I learned it with my uncle and my godmother.
I spent some time with them, it was about 2 months. There was so good, my uncle and my godmother are funny and cool. I can feel the peace when I'm there.
I think my uncle is getting a job again! I'm so glad for him, this job is the that he had before. My godmother and my uncle are planning to have a baby, it's wonderful. I'll have a beautiful cousin. Everything is gonna be alright!
Now I have to get a job! First I'll clean the house, I'll have my lunch and later I'll take the bus to go to center city. And almost forgot, I have to go to dentist today.
I helped me grandma to make the lunch as well. I made some omelets, I love it. Our lunch was so delicious : rice, beans, omelets, salad and some manioc.
I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth. At 1:00 p.m. I took the bus to go to center city. There I bought a beautiful red overcoat, I'm in love in this overcoat.
I left my resume in some shops, I really hope to get a job soon. One manager of a shop said me that he'll call me for a interview next month, I hope everything is gonna be alright, I hope he really will call me.
After to talk with this manager, I went to the dentist. My dentist made a tooth cleaning and gave me a great news : after she forward me to make a tooth resin, she said that I'll have braces removed soon. I'm so glad for it.
After to walk a lot in center city I went back to home on foot. It made me so tired, still I have to study. I arrived late in home, that's bad, but it's okay.
Later my mom phoned me to give me a number for me to put internet in my home, I need it urgently. But I'll phone tomorrow, because it's late here.
Can someone correct me?
Please, it will help me a lot. Thank you very much! :)
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July 06/2016 Wednesday
If you're ugly, I'm ugly tooIn your eyes the sky's a different blue
If you could see yourself like others do
You'd wish you were as beautiful as you, Yeah [emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]
This song is so cute *-*
Today I got up at 7:00 a.m., it's good for enjoying my day more I like it. By the way I have to go to the downtown to resolve some things again.
I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face. Then I went to the kitchen to have my breakfast, I ate bread with cheese and I drank coffee. I love to eat bread with smashed cheese, I learned how to make it from my uncle and my godmother.
I spent some time with them, it was about 2 months. It was so good, my uncle and my godmother are funny and cool. I feel at peace when I'm there.
I think my uncle is getting a job again! I'm so glad for him, this job is like what he had before. My godmother and my uncle are planning to have a baby, it's wonderful. I'll have a beautiful cousin. Everything is gonna be alright!
Now I have to get a job! First I'll clean the house, I'll have my lunch and later I'll take the bus to go to the city center. And almost forgot, I have to go to dentist today.
I helped my grandma to make the lunch as well. I made some omelets, I loved it. Our lunch was so delicious : rice, beans, omelets, salad and some manioc.
I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth. At 1:00 p.m. I took the bus to go to the city center. There I bought a beautiful red overcoat, I'm in love in this overcoat.
I left my resume in some shops, I really hope to get a job soon. One manager of a shop said me that he'll call me for an interview next month, I hope everything is gonna be alright, I hope he really will call me.
After the talk with this manager, I went to the dentist. My dentist made a tooth cleaning and gave me a great news : after she forwarded me to make a tooth resin, she said that I'll have braces removed soon. I'm so happy about it.
After a lot of walking in the city center (downtown) I went back to home on foot. It made me so tired, still I had to study. I arrived late in home, that's bad, but it's okay.
Later my mom phoned me to give me a number of the ISP to put internet in my home, I need it urgently. But I'll call them tomorrow, because it's late here.
Can someone correct me?
Please, it will help me a lot. Thank you very much! :)
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Can someone correct me?
Please, it will help me a lot. Thank you very much! :)
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