CHORES IN THE HOME I believe that the most polite opinion is everyone should shave the housework equally. However, I do not think so. When you are a child, you are a child. You need fun and be happy.

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CHORES IN THE HOME I believe that the most polite opinion is everyone should shave the housework equally. However, I do not think so. When you are a child, you are a child. You need fun and be happy. Although, in my view, It is important to do some choures and then you can incremasse them. But never in the middle. Maybe, First the can keep their stuff (make their bed, for example) and in the futere, the will can more thing like lay the table or sweep the floor. They will become ins more cooperative ans responsabilite and when they will be adult they are more independent people. But now they are only childen and teenagers. I think this because when you are a child or teenager, you are not independ. You depend ons you parents and other people because you stiil do not be a adult. Then, you must not have the same responsabilities. For all these razon, I think that in the family live children should do choures, but never like a adult.

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CHORES IN THE HOME

I believe that the most polite opinion is everyone should shave the housework equally. However, I do not think so.
When you are a child, you are a child. You need fun and be happy.
Although, in my view, It is important to do some choures and then you can incremasse them. But never in the middle.
Maybe, First the can keep their stuff (make their bed, for example) and in the futere, the will can more thing like lay the table or sweep the floor.
They will become ins more cooperative ans responsabilite and when they will be adult they are more independent people. But now they are only childen and teenagers.
I think this because when you are a child or teenager, you are not independent. You depend ons your parents and other people because you stiil do not be a adult. Then, you must not have the same responsabilities.
For all these razon, I think that in the family live children should do choures, but never like a adult.

Okay, so I had detailed edits for you and the computer died. All is lost! Rats! Here are the most important.

1. Shave. Shave means to remove the hair from someone or something. I think you mean share. You shave a beard. You share the housework. You share cookies. You must not shave the cat. (That's even trickier in handwritten English where many people make sloppy r's that look like v's.)

2. Chores. no "u"

3. Incremasse is not a word. I think you mean increase.

4. Responsible. Responsible is the adjective that describes the person. Responsibility -or plural, responsibilities- is a noun.

5. You are not yet an adult. "Still" works fine, they are still not adults, but not in the second person (you). Also the verb to be, in the present would be you are/they are (I am, he/she/it is). Its irregular and not fun, but I'm told it is irregular in every language.

6. Reason. Just a minor spelling correction.

Good work! You're making great progress with English!

CHORES IN THE HOME

I believe that the most polite opinion is everyone should shave the housework equally. However, I do not think so.

Most people believe that housework should be shared equally, but I don't think so.

When you are a child, you are a child. You need fun and be happy.

When you are a child, you need to have fun and be happy.

Although, in my view, It is important to do some choures and then you can incremasse them.

However, it is important to do some chores, and to increase them later.

But never in the middle.

(The meaning of this sentence is not clear.)

Maybe, First the can keep their stuff (make their bed, for example) and in the futere, the will can more thing like lay the table or sweep the floor.

At first, a child might make their bed, for example, and in the future do more things like setting the table or sweeping the floor.

They will become ins more cooperative ans responsabilite and when they will be adult they are more independent people. But now they are only childen and teenagers.

Doing these things will make them more cooperative and more responsible, and they will become more independent as adults. But for now, they are only children and teenagers.

I think this because when you are a child or teenager, you are not independ. You depend ons you parents and other people because you stiil do not be a adult. Then, you must not have the same responsabilities.

Children and teenagers are not independent. They depend on their parents and other people. Therefore, they must not have the same responsibilities.

For all these razon, I think that in the family live children should do choures, but never like a adult.

For all these reasons, children should never do chores like an adult.

(I understand what you mean in the last sentence, but I would word it a little different: For all these reasons, it is important that children never be treated as adults. Let children be children.")

CHORES IN THE HOME

I believe that the most polite opinion is everyone should share the housework equally. However, I do not think
When you are a child, you are a child. You need to have fun and be happy.
However in my view, It is important to do some chores and then you can incremasse them. But never in the middle.
Maybe, First keep their stuff (make their bed, for example) and in the future, the will can more thing like lay the table or sweep the floor.
They will become ins more cooperative ans responsibilities and when they will be adult they are more independent people. But now they are only children and teenagers.
I think because when you are a child or teenager, you are not independent. You depend on your parents and other people because you still are not a adult. Then, you must not have the same responsibilities.
For all these reasons, I think that in the family live children should do choures, but never like a adult.

( Your intention of what you want to express is not clear, please rewrite them or improvise the text.)

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