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Email for my friend From: [email protected] To: [email protected] Subject: I'm so sad for your deccission Hello my darling I'm emailing to write about your new decision which is study at London. I'm sure that I'll miss you a lot!!! But this is your dream, and dreams will be come true ;) I'd never believed that you leave your studies in Spain and would go to other country to start other studies. But, as I'm a good friend I'll give you some advices. You should learn a lot of English although you don't want it, because you'll live there a lot of time, so you have to survive in English. And, food should be cook by you not by your mummy haha ;) When you'll be there, don't think about how you miss your family. Think about making a adventure about it. You'd better go out with your new friends. So, don't forget you could do something you want!! If I were you, I would do exactly you've done. I'm feeling so exciting due to your decision. Anyway, I have to study....that's boring...haha I hope your answer :) xoxo Laura

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Email for my friend

From: [email protected]
To: [email protected]
Subject: I'm so sad for your decision

Hello, my darling,
I'm emailing to write about your new ("recent" is better) decision which is to study at in London. I'm sure that I'll miss you a lot!!! But this is your dream, and dreams will now be coming true ;)

I'd never believed that you would leave your studies in Spain and would go to other another country to start other ("other" doesn't sound right here.  "New studies" or "some different studies" may be better) studies. But, as I'm a good friend I'll give you some advices. You should learn a lot of English although you don't want it to, because you'll live there a lot of long time, so you have to survive in English. And, food should be cooked by you not by your mummy.  Haha ;)

When you'll be there, don't think about how much you miss your family. Think about making an adventure about it.  (I would recommend "Think about all the adventures you're having.") You'd better go out with your new friends. So, don't forget you could do are doing something you want!!  (or you "...doing something you've always dreamed of.")
If I were you, I would do exactly you've done. I'm feeling so exciting due to for/about your decision.

Anyway, I have to study....that's boring...haha
I hope your answer reply soon :)
xoxo
Laura


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Very good letter.  Your English was very understandable and just needed some grammatical help and some changes to make it sound more "natural" in English.  You're a good and encouraging friend.  I hope my suggestions are helpful.  Matt

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