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Talking about cities
1. How big is your hometown? Would you call it a city, a town, or a village?I would like to call my hometown mine a town.
The population of my homettown Its population is nearly thirty thousands.
NOTE: There's nothing wrong with stating "I would call my hometown a town" or "The population of my hometown is nearly thirty thousand". However, since the topic of the conversation is "hometown", in my opinion,there's no need to use the noun when a pronoun like "it" or possessive like "mine" would work. It makes the sentence a bit wordy when it doesn't need to be. Of course, if it isn't clear that "hometown" is what is being referred to, use the noun again.
2. What are some cities you have visited?
I have visited Tokyo, Shanghai, Bangkok, London, Paris, Brussels, Amsterdam, Berlin, Prague, Vienna, and Honolulu.
3. What is the biggest city in your country?
Taipei is the biggest city in Taiwan.
4. Why do some people like to live in big cities?
Work opportunities, leisure activities, and convenient public transportation.
5. Why do some people hate living in big cities?
Fast-paced living pace, crowded spaces, and a lots of noise.
6. In your opinion, what are some of the best cities in the world to live in?
I think Auckland and Sydney are the best cities to live in.
NOTE: Here as well, there's nothing wrong with ending your answer with "cities to live in". However, since the context of the answer is clear that you are referring to cities, it's a bit wordy to include it.
Talking about cities
1. How big is your hometown? Would you call it a city, a town, or a village?I would like to call my hometown a town.
The population of my homettown is nearly thirty thousands.
2. What are some cities you have visited?
I have visited Tokyo, Shanghai, Bangkok, London, Paris, Brussels, Amsterdam, Berlin, Prague, Vienna, and Honolulu.
3. What is the biggest city in your country?
Taipei is the biggest city in Taiwan.
4. Why do some people like to live in big cities?
There are more work opportunities, leisure activities, and convenient public transportation systems.
5. Why do some people hate living in big cities?
There is a fast living pace, overpopulation crowded space, and lots of noise.
6. In your opinion, what are some of the best cities in the world to live in?
I think Auckland and Sydney are the best cities to live in.
Talking about cities
1. How big is your hometown? Would you call it a city, a town, or a village?I would like to call my hometwon hometown a twon town.
The population of my homettown hometown is near thirty thousands.
2. What are some cities you have visited?
I have visited Tokyo, Shanghai, Bangkok, London, Paris, Brussels, Amsterdam, Berlin, Prague, Vienna, and Honolulu.
3. What is the biggest city in your country?
Taipei is the biggeset biggest city in Taiwan.
4. Why do some people like to live in big cities?
Work opportunities, leisure activities, and convenient public transportation.
5. Why do some people hate living in big cities?
Fast living pace, crowded space, and lots of noise.
6. In your opinion, what are some of the best cities in the world to live in?
I think Auckland and Sydney are the best cities to live in.
Very good! Your spelling was the only thing that was wrong. The words you got wrong were: "town", "hometown", "London", and "biggest". Your English is very good!
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