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Lose weight Luckily , I was adimitted to my ideal university. But,recently, I was worried about another thing.I was a fat girl . How to lose weight has troubled me a long time. As it known to us, keeping slim is so important. not only will it have a good and health body but it will also increase our charm and attract other's attention. What's more, I can buy more beautiful clothes. Firstly,I decided to eat a little food and don't to eat dinner.Seconed,I brought some diet pill to help me. I hoped that they can work out. Last but not least, I must to exercise, morning running is a good choice as well as walk quickly. I desire I will succeed.fighting!

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Losing Weight

Luckily , I was adimitted accepted to my ideal  the university I wanted to go to. But, recently, I was have been worried about another thing something else; I was am a fat girl . How to Losing weight has troubled me for a long time.
As it known to us we all know, keeping slim is so very important. Not only will it we have a good and healthy body but it will also increase our make us more charming and attractive others' attention. What's more, I can would be able to buy more beautiful clothes.
Firstly, I decided to eat a little food less and don't to eat skip dinner.  Secondly, I also brought some diet pills to help me. I hoped that they work out. Last but not least, I must to exercise; morning running in the morning is a good choice as well as power walking quickly.
I desire hope I will succeed.  fighting! Let's go!

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