Writing task 2

I am so stressed out and tired, thus I need to take my annual leave and relax. I am going to a friend's house in New York. I think it the journey will take around 4 hours.

In order to not leave my house alone? undefended, I would like to know whether I can rely you to look after it in my absence could look after my house or not  (Since these days many houses have been robbed, and I am kind of afraid): I know you are responsible although you like going to parties, but I think you are going to do well.

If you accept, you should do some easy tasks such as checking the main door out because I have had some problems with it. Also, clean the house twice a week. Finally, take care of bobby (a dog). As you know, He eats a lot, so try to give him his food on time.

IF you were to accept, I would be grateful and would like you to also take on some additional tasks - like checking the main door (I've previously had some problems with it), cleaning the house twice per week and finally taking care of bobby (he eats a lot so please try to give him his food on time)

You are asking someone to look after your house - PLUS, check the door PLUS feed your dog PLUS tidy the house.. lots of things you're asking for - if they cannot be bothered to tidy your house; should they do nothing or just as much as they wish?

Writing task 2

As you know, I am going away for two weeks. I'm really stressed out and tired so I need to take a vacation and relax. I'm going to a friend's house in New York and it should take around 4 hours to get there.

Could look after my house while I'm gone? Several houses in my neighborhood have been robbed and I'm kind of afraid of mine being robbed too. I know you are responsible even though you like going to parties, but I know that you'll look after it.

If you can I just need you to check the main door because I've had some problems with it. Also, clean the house twice a week and take care of Bobby (my dog). As you know, he eats a lot so try to give him his food on time if you can.