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Anime story I saw a new type of Anime.The light and the landscape was so beautiful. The main character is a young boy who is 13. He likes a girl in his school but one day she moved to another town. He decided to go to the town where she moved . He took train after school to see her.It took more hours than he had expected because the train had been delayed because of snow.At last he finally could see her.

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Anime story

I saw watched a new type of Anime.The light and the landscape was were so beautiful.
The main character is a young boy who is 13. He likes a girl in his school but one day she moved to another town.
He decided to go to the town where she moved . He took a train after school to see her. It took more hours than he had expected because the train had been delayed because of due to snow.At last he finally could see her.


Hi Kanako,

I changed the verb from "was" to "were" in the second sentence as "light and landscape" is a plural subject and "were" is the plural form of the verb. The "the" in front of landscape, though not incorrect as written, doesn't really need to be there since the "the" begins the sentence can be used for "landscape" as well, given that "light and landscape" is the subject of the sentence. In the sentence "He took train...", you need to use an article, either a direct (the) or indirect (a), to make it sound natural. "He took train" would be understandable, of course, but isn't proper English. In the last change, I changed "because of" to "due to" because I think it sounds more natural to say it that way. 


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Anime story

I saw (Watched) a new type of Anime.The light and the landscape was so beautiful.
The main character is a young boy who is 13. He likes a girl in his school but one day she moved to another town.
He decided to go to the town where she moved . He took train after school to see her.It took more hours than he had expected because the train had been delayed because of snow.At last he finally could see her.


Watch is used when things are moving! 
I think so! i'm not an expert :s

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