Hi, I'm practicing my writing skills, and I need some help with the mistakes... Could you help me? Last year, I went to Germany with my friend because she has some relatives there and she wanted to visit them. The first weeks, we visited as many places as we could, and one night we attended a fashion show where were famous models. They were friendly, so we took some photos with them. The last week before we came back to our country, we decided to do a tour with a tourist guide and other people to visit the castles and the old ruins. The last day of the tour,my sister didn't join us because she was tired. With my friend, we were tired too, but despite that, we visited a famous castle that was in the middle of an Island. My friend and I were so impresed by the beauty of the castle that we didn't realize that we were among the rubbles and we were lost. The tourist guide and the other people were gone, and we didn't even know where we were. I tried to call my sister, but in that place was not sign. We started walking without knowing exactly where. We were drenched in sweat, covered in mosquito bites, starving and scared, when finally, we saw a hut. We approached there and we saw a man. After explain him our situation, he offered to take us to the city where we met my sister. She was very angry because I didn't answer her calls, but then she could understand. In the end, we said goodbye to my friend's family and we went to the airport where we took the plane to come back.