Vacation and the need of being productive
Hello, everybody! I'm on vacation since last wednesday and i'm thinking about the need of being productive...Here, in Brazil, we usually study 5 months in college, then we get 1 month of vacation. You're getting older and you have more and more responsabilities. The society, as a whole, expects that you will be successful and to reach it, you can't waste your time...In my case, i'm on vacation but i can't stop thinking in my studies and work. Therefore, comes up the question: until what point be hard on yourself is healthy?
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Vacation and the need to be productive,
Hello everybody! I have been on vacation since last Wednesday and I have been thinking about the need to be productive...Here in Brazil, we usually study 5 months in college, then we get 1 month of vacation. When a person is getting older they have more and more responsibilities. The society, as a whole, expects that you will be successful and achieve results, you can't waste your time. In my case, I'm on vacation but I can't stop thinking about my studies and work. This raises the question: until what point is being hard on yourself healthy?This is well written Larissa. I understood what you were saying without difficulty. The changes I made are so that it sounds more natural. The errors are those that are typical for an advanced student of English, proper usage of prepositions and whatnot.
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