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I write on note book for the first time Hello! Nice to meet you. My name is Hiko. I was born in Japan, and live in Japan now, also I'm currently studying at university. Therefore, I'm a native Japanese speaker. In this September, I'm going to travel to Austlia in Europe for about two weeks as international student. I'm nervous now because I have never been to foreign country and I'm not good at English. In particular, I have only a poor speaking and listening in English. Even though I said it, I'm not used to write and read in English too. So, I'd like to write something in English on note book in italki as much as possible to practice my English. If my sentences in English is mistake (improper word, grammar error...etc), could you please correct my sentence? Can I start you off with sentences on this note book? Finally, I hope that I can connect with a foreigner on italki.

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I write on note book for the first time

Hello! Nice to meet you. My name is Hiko.
I was born in Japan, and live in Japan now; also, I'm currently studying at university. Therefore, I'm a native Japanese speaker.

In this  (<- you only need to use one or the other, so In Sep. or N) September, I'm going to travel to Australia in Europe for about two weeks as an international student. I'm nervous now because I have never been to a foreign country and I'm not good at English. In particular, I only have  poor speaking and listening in English. Even though I said this, I'm not used to writing and reading in English.
So, I'd like to write (you do not need something) in English on note book in italki as much as possible to practice my English. If my sentences in English have mistakes (improper word, grammar error...etc), could you please correct my sentence? Can I start you off with sentences on this note book?

Finally, I hope that I can connect with a foreigner on italki.
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I write on notebook for the first time*

Hello! Nice to meet you. My name is Hiko.
I was born in Japan, and [am living/live] in Japan there right now. Also, I'm currently studying at university. Therefore, I'm a native Japanese speaker.**

In this September, I'm going to travel to Austlia*** in Europe for about two weeks as an international student. I'm nervous now because I have never been to a foreign country and I'm not good at English. In particular, I have only a poor speaking and listening in English skills. Even though I said it****, I'm not used to writing and reading in English.

So, I'd like to write something in English on notebook in italki as much as possible to practice my English. If my sentences in English is has a mistake (improper word, grammar error...etc), could you please correct my sentence it? Can I start you off with the sentences on in this notebook?


Finally, I hope that I can connect with a foreigner on italki.

*A better way of saying this is 'My first time writing in notebook.' 

**This sentence would be better right after 'I was born in Japan and am living there right now.'

***Do you mean Austria?

****It would make more sense if you used 'Also, I'm not used...' or 'I'm also not used...'

I would recommend that you try using more pronouns. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.

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