My impression about movie
Hello there! I thought my english is normal more or less. But I'd been deeply mistaken. Please, correct my text below.
I'd like to tell you about the movie that I saw one day. It called "A Beautiful Mind" (2001) with Russell Crowe. This story about the mathematician scientist, insane genius - John Nash. This film based on the real life events. The main character lived a very long life with his disease of mind, but he learned to keep that under control. I got empressed by that movie and thought about it several days in row. I was thinking about human mind and why that horrible things kept happen. However, that story has a happy end.
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My impression about movie
Hello there! I thought my English is normal more or less. But I'd been deeply mistaken. Please, correct my text below.I'd like to tell you about the movie that I saw one day. It called "A Beautiful Mind" (2001) with Russell Crowe. This story is about the mathematician scientist, insane genius - John Nash. This film is based on the real life events. The main character lived a very long life with his disease of mind, but he learned to keep that under control. I got empressed impressed by that movie and thought about it several days in row. I was thinking about human mind and why that horrible things kept happening. However, that story has a happy end.
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My impressions about a movie
Hello there! I thought my english was normal more or less. But I'd been deeply mistaken. Please correct my text below.I'd like to tell you about a movie that I saw one day. It was called "A Beautiful Mind" (2001) with Russell Crowe. This story is about the mathematician and insane genius John Nash. This film based on real life events. The main character lived a very long life with his mental illness, but he learned to keep it under control. I was impressed by the movie and thought about it several days in row. I was thinking about the human mind and why horrible things like that happen. However, the story had a happy ending.
Hey! Your entry was pretty good, just a few small mistakes. But the important thing is that even with the mistakes I was able to completely understand what you were trying to say. With some of the mistakes I marked, though they were technically correct, they were just worded in a way that a native speaker would never say, so I went ahead and changed them to sound more natural.
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