the characteristics of friends,
Decsribe the characteristics of friends, use specific example to support your statement.
I think good friends should be frank. For example, my best friend, MIike. As we all konw, it is normal that people can't always see their own weakness and most people around us do not point out our shortcomings. But Mike always help to point out my weakness. Last time, I quarreled with my parents because my parents were in disagreement with me. I complained to him about it and thought he would make me comfort. But when he knowed the process, he did not comfort me instead of telling me I should apologize to my parents. He taught me that my parents was also for my own sake and I should listen to my parents' views rather than argue with them. After listening to him, I realized my mistake. Now, I get along well with my parents . I feel so fortunate that I could have such a friend.
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Characteristics of Friends,
Describe the characteristics of friends; use specific example to support your statement.I think good friends should be frank (honest). For example, my best friend, Mike. As we all know, it is normal that people can't always see their own weakness and most people around us do not point out our shortcomings. But Mike is always there to help point out my weakness. Last time, I fought with my parents because they disagreed with me. I complained to him about it and thought he would comfort me. But when he learned what happened, he did not comfort me but instead, he told me that I should apologize to my parents. He taught me that my parents wanted the best for me and I should listen to my parents' views rather than argue with them. After listening to him, I realized my mistake. Now, I get along well with my parents . I feel so fortunate that I could have such a friend.
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For the most part, this is very good. I have put in a few adjustments that I think help to express your intent better in English.
I think good friends should be frank. For example, my best friend, Mike. As we all know, it is normal that people can't always see their own weaknesses. Most people around us do not point out our shortcomings. But Mike always helps to point out my weaknesses. Last time, I quarreled with my parents. I complained to him about it and I thought he would comfort me. But when he knew what happened, he did not comfort me. Instead he told me, I should apologize to my parents. He explained that my parents wanted what was in my best interest and I should listen to my parents' views rather than argue with them. After listening to him, I realized my mistake. Now, I get along well with my parents . I feel so fortunate that I could have such a friend.
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