Search from various English teachers...
Mexico flagAlejandro Tena
Uncertainity avoiding societies The term uncertainity avoidance was used in the 1960´s in the well known american book about to see a real firm it was applied to the level of organizations, but I brought it in 1970´s for describing differences between national societies. What does uncertainity avoidance mean?. Uncertainity avoidance is the extent to which the members of a culture of a national society feels threatened by ambiguous and unknown situations, some people think, that it means risk avoidance, but does not mean risk avoidance and have a good example to show why that is the case. What does uncertainty avoidance stands for?. I am opposing here two extremes, the uncertainty avoiding societies and the uncertainty accepting societies, and actually most societies are somewhere in between. In uncertainty avoiding societies, the uncertainty which it is inherent in life, it is a threat that most be fought. Whereas in uncertainty accepting societies, uncertainty is normal.

Corrections · 3

1

Uncertainty avoiding societies

The term uncertainty avoidance was used in the 1960´s, in a the well known american book. about to see a real firm It was applied to the organization level, but I brought it in 1970´s for describing differences between national societies. What does uncertainity avoidance mean?. Uncertainity avoidance is the extent to which the members of a culture of a national society, feels threatened by ambiguous and unknown situations. Some people think that it means risk avoidance but it does not mean risk avoidance. I have a good example to show why that is the case. What does uncertainty avoidance stands for?. I am will contrast two extremes, the uncertainty avoiding societies and the uncertainty accepting societies, most societies are somewhere in between. In uncertainty avoiding societies, the uncertainty which it is inherent in life, it is a threat that most be fought. Whereas, in uncertainty accepting societies, uncertainty is normal.

I added commas and shortened some run-on sentences. In the beginning you wrote "about to see a real firm", I wasn't sure what you meant. The way it was written didn't make much sense. You also had some extra periods that I added a strike-through to. With the way that you explain it, it doesn't seem that "uncertainty avoidance" is the "extent to which [societies] feel threatened, but it's actually just the action of feeling threatened. Although it can be hard to determine, since your argument wasn't completed and you never gave us your "good example"  Over all you're writing about some pretty technical stuff, which is very impressive. 

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today