My favorite band
One of my favorite bands is Imagine Dragons. I like them because it plays alternative rock. Imagine Dragons sold a lot of albums in their premiere. As result a, their best CD is Smoke and Mirrors so their best song is Demons.
The keyboard player retired in 2011 and therefore the band hired William Wells. Imagine Dragons had seventeen awards and it created seven albums.
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My favorite band
One of my favorite bands is Imagine Dragons. I like them because they play alternative rock. Imagine Dragons sold a lot of albums when they premiered. I think their best CD is Smoke and Mirrors, and I think their best song is Demons.The keyboard player retired in 2011 and therefore the band hired William Wells. Imagine Dragons has had seventeen awards and it has created seven albums.
Very good! Just a few minor mistakes! Hope this helps!
I just realized you may have been talking about sales in your second sentence, and if that is the case it should read like this:
"As a result, their best selling CD is Smoke and Mirrors, and their best selling song is Demons."
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My favorite band
One of my favorite bands is Imagine Dragons. I like them because they play alternative rock. Imagine Dragons sold a lot of albums in their premiere. As a result, their best CD is Smoke and Mirrors and their best song is Demons.The keyboard player retired in 2011 and therefore the band hired William Wells. Imagine Dragons had seventeen awards and it created seven albums.
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