My friends
My friend Jane is a teacher. She always care about my studies. And she always tell me the good ways of studies. She is a nice lady. And anthor friend chocolate is a beautiful. Sometimes she is unhappy whoes tell me what's wrong, what's happen. I thingk she is a littel bit upset. Cause she is yanger girl, just only 17 years old. My old friend Lucy is a nice girl, she love dramming.She is good at dramming. I remmber she likes dramming cuase she likes artties, felling the beautifull visual.
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My friends
My friend Jane is a teacher. She always cares about my studies, and she always tells me the good ways of studies to study. She is a nice lady; and anthor another friend, chocolate, is a beautiful. Sometimes she is unhappy. whoes tell me Who knows what's wrong, or what's happening(*). I thingk think she is a littel bit upset because(+) she is yanger a younger girl just (only 17 years old). My old friend Lucy is a nice girl, she loves dramming drumming.She is good at dramming drumming. I remmber remember she likes dramming drumming becuase she likes artties, felling the beautifull visual art.(*) "Who knows..." is an English phrase used when you can't figure something out.
(+) "Cause" is an acceptable short form of "Because", used mainly in spoken English.
Dramming Did you mean to say "Drumming" (like playing an instrument), or "Drama" (like acting in a movie or a play)? Either way it is considered to be artistic. Also, I couldn't think of a phrase to match "Feeling the beautiful visual. Maybe "She likes feeling beautiful" (?) either way, I really like that phrase.
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