There Are Many Worlds but All of Them Are Inside Ours.
I often wonder what motive to a person to do what he do. How to explain that brothers who grow up into the same family, live in the same neighbourhood and study at the same school develop, as time goes by, such a diferent so-called way of life?. Whereas many persons not only make hard efforts to achive his goals working hard but also being an assess for their comunity, for instance giving back to it, others behave in a selfish way or refuse to pursue their dreams avoid outdoing themselves. People that belong to the first group are usually loved by their closers, because they contribute to make life go easier, instead of complicated it, as people who belong to the second group do. As a result, we don't take in granted that bringing up childrens in a accurately way , they end up being good citizens. It is a tough issue, which has been studied by philosophers for many years. Maybe, amount them, the Spanish one, Ortega y Gasset, sheds light on the issue when he says "Both circumstances and personality make up the human being". And adding up both of them produce an unique person. Sometimes, either a wonderful one or an awful one.
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There Are Many Worlds, But All of Them Are Inside Ours.
I often wonder what motivates to a person to do what he does. How can one explain that brothers who grow up into the same family, live in the same neighbourhood and study at the same school develop, as time goes by, such a diferent so-called way of life?. Whereas many people not only make a strong efforts to achieve their goals by working hard, but also by being an asset to their comunity, for instance by giving back to it, others behave in a selfish way or refuse to pursue their dreams to avoid outdoing themselves(not sure what you mean - to avoid working hard? To avoid taking risks?) . People that belong to the first group are usually loved by their community because they contribute to make life run smoother, instead of complicating it, as people who belong to the second group do. Because of this, we don't take for granted that if we bring up childrens in a proper way, they end up being good citizens. It is a tough issue, which has been studied by philosophers for many years. Maybe, amount them, The Spanish philosopher, Ortega y Gasset, sheds light on the issue when he says, "Both circumstances and personality make up the human being." The combination of both of them produces an unique person. Sometimes, either a wonderful one, sometimes an awful one.The bold words are not wrong, they just wouldn't be put into a sentence right there. It's a bit too much detail for one sentence, making it too long and a bit awkward. Also, it is "a unique person" rather than "an" - this is an exception. The reasoning behind it is that when you pronounce the word "unique," you begin with the 'y' sound, which is not vowel-like. Words that start with a long u (a unit, a unicorn) use "a" rather than "an."
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