Izumo Taisha Shrine
The other day, I went to Izumo Taisha Shrine with a friend of mine. We were able to get there early in the morning, So it was completely empty and we were able to pray in peace. Morning Izumo Taisha Shrine was very quiet and spiritual. Usually it is very crowded, but we were very lucky. If you want to visit the Shrine, you must try to go there early in the morning.
07/25/2016
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Izumo Taisha Shrine
The other day, I went to Izumo Taisha Shrine with a friend of mine. We were able to get there early in the morning, Sso it was completely empty and we were able to pray in peacefully. That Mmorning Izumo Taisha Shrine was very quiet and spiritual. Usually it is very crowded, but we were very lucky. If you want to visit the Shrine, you must try to go there early in the morning.07/25/2016
おもしろいですよ。日本の神社を見て行きたい。(I want to visit some Japanese shrines. The sound beautiful and fascinating).
In the phrase "we were very lucky" I think you should remove "very" because you said "very" just before ("it is very crowded"). Try not to repeat words
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Izumo Taisha Shrine
The other day, I went to Izumo Taisha Shrine with a friend of mine. We were able to get there early in the morning, so it was completely empty and we were able to pray in peace. In the morning Izumo Taisha Shrine was very quiet and spiritual. Usually it is very crowded, but we were very lucky. If you want to visit the Shrine, you must try to go there early in the morning.07/25/2016
Very well written, great job! :)
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