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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Majority of people evaluate their health and life. Every person would like to get the best treatment, but often we are using the different ways for that goal. Some people choose traditional medicine, other have strong believe in the untraditional methods. I would like to consider some pros and cons of these two points of view.
First of all that needs to be said, that many of people prefer to ask for help to doctors. Usually, that could be a right decision, because of the doctors getting specific education, knowledge and experience. No doubt, these is strong advantages of untraditional medicine.
On the other hand, nowadays, more and more people are seeking the alternative forms of medicine. Some of them are trying to find advices via internet or by friends. There are some advantages and disadvantages of it. Although this method is cheaper, and sometimes faster to get information about treatment. The huge problem is to find useful information among big amount of sources, adverts, opinions and so on. Moreover, self-treatment may be dangerous.
Summarize about two point of view, I’d like to notice that both of them could be useful depends on the situations. There are some countries where the medicine so low quality that people there believe more the World Wide Web than the ‘professional’ doctors. But if you are from the rich country with good medicine services, it could be knowledgeable to receive assistance from hospital.
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