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If I am a frog If I am a frog, I want to travel all over the world. But, firstly,I need to find a company.Because traveling by myself will feel lonely. I plan to walk to Xizhang, where rivers join together and montains touch to the sky. I want to see wonderful sight.Then,I want to swim in the sea. I am good at swimming, so I won't sink and will play with fish happily. I will see many frogs,who have different skin color. I am sure that I will make friends with them and be friendly to everyone. haha, Can you guess I am a white frog..

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If I were a frog

Because you are talking about an unreal situation, I've changed the grammar so it's correct.

I am --> if I were

I want --> I would (I'd) want

If I were a frog, I'd want to travel all over the world.
But, firstly, I'd need to find some company. because travelling by myself would feel lonely.
I'd plan to hop to Xizhang, where rivers join together and mountains touch to the sky. I'd want to see such a wonderful sight. Then,I'd want to swim in the sea. I am good at swimming, so I wouldn't sink and would play happily with fish.
I'd see many frogs, who'd have a different skin color. I am sure that I'd become friends with them and be friendly to everyone. Haha, can you guess that I'd be a white frog...
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If I am a frog, I want to travel all over the world.

But, first, I need to find company, because I will feel lonely traveling by myself.

I plan to walk to Xizhang, where rivers join together and mountains touch the sky. I want to see the wonderful sight. Then, I want to swim in the sea. I am good at swimming, so I won't sink and I will happily play with fishes.

I will see many frogs, whom have different skin colors. I am sure that we'll be friends. haha, Can you guess? I am a white frog..

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If I am a frog

If I am a frog, I want to travel all over the world.
But, firstly,I need to find a company.Because traveling by myself will feel lonely.
I plan to walk to Xizhang, where rivers join together and mountains touch to the sky. I want to see wonderful sights. Then,I want to swim in the sea. I am good at swimming, so I won't sink and I will happily play with fish happily.
I will see many frogs,who have different skin color. I am sure that I will make friends with them and be friendly to everyone. haha, Can you guess I am a white frog..

Comment: This is very good. My corrections are minor. Good work.

Gary

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