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Invented story Hello everybody! I've decided to write something to improve my English, so I'll write a invented story. It was a raining day. This morning I didn't feell well but I didn't know why. My head was hurt, I had a huge headache. Everything around me was untidy. I tried to remember what had happened. Where I have been that night? I sat on my bed trying to remember it, but I couldn't. I watched me at the mirror and I coudn't recognize me. That person isn't me. I was in my house so I went to my kitchen. Somebody had made breakfast. I really like coffee. There was a note that said: "Hello darling thank you for this amazing night. See you on Sunday, don't forget it". who was that person? What was happening to me? I looked out through the windows and I saw my car parked at the corner. I thought that maybe there was an answer in my car, so I dressed up (got dressed¿?¿?) and I left the flat after I took my cofee. To be continued....

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Invented story

Hello everybody!

I've decided to write something to improve my English, so I'll write an invented story.

It was a rainy day. That morning I didn't feel well but I didn't know why. My head was hurt, (Better would be: I had hurt my head) I had a huge headache. Everything around me was untidy. I tried to remember what had happened. Where had I been the previous night? I sat on my bed trying to remember it, but I couldn't. I looked at myself in the mirror but I couldn't recognize the reflection. That person wasn't me!

I was in my house so I went to my kitchen. Somebody had made breakfast. I really like coffee. There was a note that said: "Hello darling thank you for this amazing night. See you on Sunday, don't forget it". Who had written this note? What was happening to me?

I looked out through the windows and I saw my car parked at the corner. I thought that maybe there was an answer in my car, so I got dressed and left the flat after taking my (maybe you mean: drinking my) coffee.


To be continued....


Notes: This is a very mysterious passage. It has some very enthralling buildup. I'm very curious about what happens next! :) Excellent start to a potentially exciting story!

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Invented story

Hello everybody!

I've decided to write something to improve my English, so I'll write an invented story.

It was a rainy day. This morning, I didn't feel well and I didn't know why. I had a huge headache. Everything around me was untidy. I tried to remember what had happened. Where had I been that night? I sat on my bed trying to remember it, but I couldn't. I watched myself in the mirror and I didn't recognize myself. That person isn't me.

I was in my house and went to the kitchen. Someone had made breakfast. I really like coffee. There was a note that said, "Hello darling, thank you for the amazing night. See you on Sunday, don't forget about it." Who was that person? What is happening to me?

I looked out the window and I saw my car parked at the corner. I thought that maybe there was an answer in my car, so I got dressed and I left my house after I drank my coffee.


To be continued....
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Nice story! Keep it up!

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