At the supermarket
The another day my parents and me went to the supermarket. When we entered take a shopping cart because we buy a lot of things which we need in the flat, for instance: water, wine, snapkin, jam...
On the right side we look the butcher so I went there and I bought ham thinly sliced because I love it!
While my parents walking althoug aisle at the supermarket. Suddendly, my father shouts to me because he saw the milk has gone off, so we looked for the cashier and I told that. The cashier was so polite and he removed all milk cartons and he gave to us other milks cartons.
It was the first time we went that supermarket but the cashier was very nice.
Finally we were happy as a sandboy because the assistent did a sale in our check!
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At the supermarket
The another day my parents and I went to the supermarket. When we entered, we got a shopping cart/trolley because we wanted/had to buy a lot of things which we needed in the flat, for instance: water, wine, napkins, jam...On the right side we saw the butcher so I went there and I bought thinly sliced ham because I love it!
While my parents were walking along the aisle at the supermarket, my father suddenly shouted to me because he saw the milk had gone off, so we looked for the cashier and I told him that. The cashier was so polite and he removed all the milk cartons and he gave to us other milk cartons.
It was the first time we had been to that supermarket but the cashier was very nice.
Finally we were happy as sandboys because the assistant (did a sale in our check!) gave us a discount on our bill.
Hello Noelia,
A nice simple story which I could understand in full. There are however some mistakes. Remember that, in English, adjectives normally come in front of the noun (green). Also if you are talking about something which happened before a time in the past we often use the past perfect (blue)
In the first line, when you are talking about the first person in front of a verb you should always use 'I'
Best wishes
Bob
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At the supermarket
The another One day my parents and me I went to the supermarket. When we entered we take took a shopping cart because we wanted to buy a lot of things which we need (in the flat/at home), for instance: water, wine, snapkin ?, jam...On the right side, we look saw the butcher so I went there and I bought ham thinly sliced ham because I love it!
While my parents walking althoug through aisle at the supermarket. Suddenly, my father shouts to me because he saw the milk (has gone off/spilt from cartons), so we looked for the cashier and I told (that / him about it) . The cashier was so polite and (he removed all milk cartons and he gave to us other milk cartons/ he replaced those cartons with a new one) .
It was the first time we went to that supermarket (but /and) the cashier was very nice.
Finally, we were happy as a sandboy because the assistant did a sale in our check!
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la frase en este contexto es "the other day" es muy común. "The other day my parents and I...."
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