MEETING DONALD TRUMP
Despite the political content, I'm looking for a correction :D Thank you very much in advance!!
Among important American people I find hard the choice of meeting one of them. However, my interest on one nowadays topic has risen pretty much during the last months: American elections. Donald Trump has sparked my curiosity, so I think this person is the one I would want to meet if I had the opportunity. Nevertheless, what drives my choice is not the admiration for this man, but his surprising retrograde ideas.
Listening to his political program makes me think about how humanity can go back in time and be less tolerant, more racist and selfish. Nowadays we are facing the globalization from first row and the developed countries are those which are steering the process. It happens to me that populism, which Donald Trump ahead try call globalization to a halt. Apart from political opinion and international relations, I would be very glad if this person could give me a plausible explanation of his way of thinking, because I do not really understand his reasons.
In addition, I would like to propose him diverse situation to figure out how he would act or respond. In my opinion, his measures will never work at a long term, causing much more problems when trying to resolving only one.
Segregation is one of the main idea in Donald Trump’s party. Maybe hidden at first sight, it is clearly related with closing the borders which is his principal goal. I would want to have the occasion of telling him real stories about refugees and immigrants from Europe. Syria, Iraq, Afghanistan are some countries where the population are utterly desperate for escaping. They deserve to live in good conditions, far from war and suffering, not frightened of being killed.
Sadly, not until the voters of Donald Trump open the eyes, will America be safe of going back in history, committing dramatic mistakes.
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MEETING DONALD TRUMP
Despite the political content, I'm looking for a correction :D Thank you very much in advance!!Among important American people I find hard the choice of meeting one of them. However, my interest on one nowadays topic has risen pretty much during the last months: American elections. Donald Trump has sparked my curiosity, so I think this person is the one I would want to meet if I had the opportunity. Nevertheless, what drives my choice is not the admiration for this man, but his surprising retrograde ideas.
Listening to his political program makes me think about how humanity can go back in time and be less tolerant, more racist and selfish. Nowadays we are facing the globalization from first row and the developed countries are those which are steering the process. It happens to me that populism, which Donald Trump ahead try call globalization to a halt. Apart from political opinion and international relations, I would be very glad if this person could give me a plausible explanation of his way of thinking, because I do not really understand his reasons.
In addition, I would like to propose to him a diverse difficult situation to figure out how he would act or respond. In my opinion, his measures will never work at a in the long term, causing much many more problems when trying to resolving resolve only one.
Segregation is one of the main idea in Donald Trump’s party. Maybe hidden at first sight, it is clearly related with closing the borders which is his principal goal. I would want to have the occasion of telling him real stories about refugees and immigrants from Europe. Syria, Iraq, Afghanistan are some countries where the population are utterly desperate for escaping escape. They deserve to live in good conditions, far from war and suffering, not frightened of being killed.
Because "him" is an indirect object, it must have the preposition "to" in front. This is because he is receiving something from you: a proposal. Also, you must use the indefinite article "a" before "situation".
"Diverse" suggests various kinds situations. Did you mean difficult or challenging?
"In" is the correct preposition for this context. Because "long term" is definite, you should use the definite article "the" rather than the indefinite article "a".
"Much" is used for uncountable nouns, such as substances. Because "problems" is a countable noun, the adjective "many" should be used instead."Resolving" is a progressive verb. It describes an ongoing action. In this case, you should use the infinitive "to resolve" to describe what he is "trying" to do.
In this context, you should use a noun rather than the progressive verb "escaping". The noun shows what the populations are desperate for.
Sadly, not until the voters of Donald Trump open the eyes, will America be safe of going back in history, committing dramatic mistakes.
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MEETING DONALD TRUMP
Despite the political content, I'm looking for a correction :D Thank you very much in advance!!Among important Americans people I find hard the choice of meeting one of them. However, my interest on one nowadays current topic has risen pretty much during the last months: American elections. Donald Trump has sparked my curiosity, so I think this person is the one I would want to meet if I had the opportunity. Nevertheless, what drives my choice is not the admiration for this man, but his surprisingly retrograde ideas.
When writing in English, you want to use as few words as possible. Using fewer words makes your sentences flow better. You can change "American people" to "Americans".
Do you mean "I have a hard time choosing which one I would like to meet"?
"Nowadays" is a noun used to refer to current or present times. However, because it is a noun, it cannot be used to describe another noun ("topic"). You should instead use an adjective, such as "current" or "present".
"Surprising" is an adjective. Because it is an adjective, it can only be used to describe nouns, and it cannot be used to describe other adjectives. In order to correctly express your surprise at "retrograde ideas," you should turn the adjective "surprising" into an adverb by adding "-ly" to the end of "surprising". This would make the adverb "surprisingly" which can describe the adjective "retrograde".
Listening to his political program makes me think about how humanity can go back in time and be less tolerant, more racist and selfish. Nowadays we are facing the globalization from first row and the developed countries are those which are steering the process. It happens seems to me that populism, which Donald Trump ahead try heads, tries to call globalization to a halt. Apart from political opinion and international relations, I would be very glad if this person could give me a plausible explanation of his way of thinking, because I do not really understand his reasons.
"Happens" describes an event that took place. To say "It happens to me" suggests that something is acted upon you on a recurring basis. To describe thoughts that occur to you rather than actions that are performed, you want to use a word like "seems" instead.
In addition, I would like to propose to him a diverse situation to figure out how he would act or respond. In my opinion, his measures will never work at a long term, causing much more problems when trying to resolving only one.
Segregation is one of the main idea in Donald Trump’s party. Maybe hidden at first sight, it is clearly related with closing the borders which is his principal goal. I would want to have the occasion of telling him real stories about refugees and immigrants from Europe. Syria, Iraq, Afghanistan are some countries where the population are utterly desperate for escaping. They deserve to live in good conditions, far from war and suffering, not frightened of being killed.
Because "him" is an indirect object, it must have the preposition "to" in front. This is because he is receiving something from you: a proposal. Also, you must use the indefinite article "a" before "situation".
Sadly, not until the voters of Donald Trump open the eyes, will America be safe of going back in history, committing dramatic mistakes.
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I still think he's not really "thinking" and simply pandering to what people want to hear. I think he even wrote a similar quote in his book. Very interesting notebook entry :)
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Interesting note :))
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