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Happiness Every morning, i would leave home early to read some English downstairs of our apartment building before i go to work. Sometimes i could come across the three or four years old little boy.His grandpa held his hands and walked him to kindergarden. He is a little plump that make him walk like a baby penguin.Anyway he looks very cute. Today, he walked through me and stopped said "hello! good morning, iam going to school". I smiled at him " oh Have a good day." I dont know why but his this one sentence just made me so happy. He make me think that what is the difference between children and adults. Children like looking at the world in a curious and intersting way and treat strangers naturally which our adults can't do.Since when we cant do these anymore. Maybe when i get older and not sensitive to feel happiness any more. I would want a child.I believe he or she would teach me how to feel happiness from every small things happened in our lives.

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Happiness

Every morning, I would leave home early to read some English downstairs of our apartment building before i go to work. Sometimes i could come across the three or four years old little boy. His grandpa held his hands and walked him to kindergarden. He is a little plump,  and that makes him walk like a baby penguin. Anyways he looks very cute.
Today, he walked through(maybe you could put "toward" or ":into" here) me and stopped and  said "hello! good morning, I am going to school". I smiled at him and replied, " oh? Have a good day." I dont know why but his this one sentence just made me so happy.
He made me think that (wonder) what is the difference between children and adults is. Children like looking at the world in a curious and intersting way and treat strangers naturally which our adults can't do. Since when we cant do these anymore.(I don't understand this sentence)
      Maybe when I get older I will not be sensitive to feel happiness any more. I would like to have want a child. I believe he or she would teach me how to feel happiness from every small thing that happened in our lives.

 

--here is the corrections, the yellow is any changes that I made, and the line through the words are words you don't need in the text. Also I added some words to allow everything to flow better. hope this helps! :)

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