How I spent yesterday. Yesterday I woke up around 6:30-7:00 am, I get up and went to bathroom, brushed my teeth and washed my face. I did some exercise. Then I took tea around 8:00 am. Then I took a

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Rahul

How I spent yesterday. Yesterday I woke up around 6:30-7:00 am, I get up and went to bathroom, brushed my teeth and washed my face. I did some exercise. Then I took tea around 8:00 am. Then I took a bath. After that I got ready and took my breakfast. I left room around 10:00 am. I took metro from Huda city center and dropped at Noida sector 15. There I went in different consultancy for the interview. I took lunch around 2:00 pm. after finished my work there I returned to my room around 7:00 pm. I watched television then took my dinner around 10:00 pm and went to sleep around 11:00 pm.

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How I spent yesterday.

Yesterday I woke up around 6:30-7:00 am, I got up and went to bathroom, brushed my teeth and washed my face and then I did some exercise. After that I had tea around 8:00 am. Later I took a bath and after that I got ready and had my breakfast. I left home around 10:00 am and I took metro from Huda city center and got off at Noida sector 15. There I went to a different consultancy for an interview. I had lunch around 2:00 pm and after, finished my work there and returned home around 7:00 pm. I watched television then had dinner around 10:00 pm and went to sleep around 11:00 pm.

Awesome! Nice work. As it was originally was pretty good. My corrections are to help you avoid repetition and to give you a few more sequencing words.

*I took lunch. Isn't technically wrong, it's just that no one really says that any more. It sound like the something the Queen would say!

Notice how the corrections are all very similar: home (not room) even if you live in a room, it's still okay to say home. Conjunction: and Sequencing words: first, then, after that, later...

Hope this helps. Keep up the good work!

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