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My last year vacations (or My vacations of the last year) Last year I went to the beach with all my family. We went to a National Park located at the north of my country, It is called "Mochima". It was the second time we visited. There were so many beautiful places and most of them looked like a paradise. We went to a small island there called "Isla de Plata". It was my favorite! . I had to beg my family to coma back again, because that place was really awesome. There were a lot of different fish with different colors. That day was really awesome. When we were on the boat returning to our hotel, hundred of dolphins appeared!!. They were so beautiful. It became one of favorite days ever!

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My last year vacations (or My vacations of the last year)  

Last year I went to the beach with all my family. We went to a National Park located at in the north of my country, It is called "Mochima". It was the second time we visited. There were so many beautiful places and most of them looked like a paradise. We went to a small island there called "Isla de Plata". It was my favorite! . I had to beg my family to comae back again, because that place was really awesome. There were a lot of different fish with different colors. That day was really awesome. When we were on the boat returning to our hotel, hundreds of dolphins appeared!!. They were so beautiful. It became That day is one of my favorite days ever!
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My last year vacations (or My vacations of the last year)

Last year I went to the beach with all of my family. We went to a National Park located at in the north of my country. It is called "Mochima". It was the second time we visited. There were so many beautiful places and most of them looked like a paradise. We went to a small island there called "Isla de Plata". It was my favorite! . I had to beg my family to come back again, because that place was really awesome. There were a lot of different fish with (or:of many) different colors. That day was really awesome. When we were on the boat returning to our hotel, hundred of dolphins appeared!!. They were so beautiful. It became one of favorite days ever!


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Como repetiste tantas veces la palabra "awasome" yo la voy a utilizar para describir tu texto. Awasome! :)

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