William's IELTS : Apr 08, 2011
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays sports program have been a vital part of our entertainment. As a result professionals on sports have much more fortune than other field’s. Whether the fortune is distributed fairly is highly debated.
Some people believe that too much money is paid to the sports professionals, which reveals the unjust of the society. They point out that the sports professionals do not make subjects that benefit the GDP growth. Therefore they are not worth getting that great amount of money. They take the view that the money paid to sports professionals is supposed to be given other professionals such as inventors, experts on earthquake, doctors, so that they can dedicate themselves to the research. or jobs.
However the other people hold the opinion that sports professionals deserve the salaries given by the society. From childhood on, sports professionals have been worked hard to gain the success. They do exercises everyday to prepare for the game held once several years which can entertain the public. Besides, sports professionals represent the spirit of working-hard. Only if ones work hard, can they eventually succeed. These people point out that the sports professionals should be paid more because of their perfect appearance during sports game.
I agree that sports professionals are supposed to paid more money. In this informative world, sports games such as NBA, Soccer , FIFA , play a important role in our lives. I advise that sports professionals are the actors of the sports field. They make our lives more colourful. Meanwhile their experiences show us the process of being successful.
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i will take IELTS this month. I am so nervous. And I am so worried about it that I can not sleep well....Good luck to you!
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Hope your IELTS have a good result . Good luck O(∩_∩)O~
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