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Sentence practice 1. The new semester starts in September. 2. If you have submitted your paper to the professor, you can get some days off. 3. You don't think I'm good at singing. Even if I sung you a serenade, you wouldn't even pay me attention. 4. I didn't think you had become a liar. If I had listened to my friends' advice, I would have broken up with you. 5.If it's raining now, we ought to drive back to the movie theater.

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Not necessarily wrong, but it sounds more natural to say:

2. If you have submitted your paper to the professor, you can have some days off.


And I think your verb tenses are confused here: 

3. You don't think I'm good at singing. Even if I had sung you a serenade, you wouldn't have paid attention to me.

Or:

3. You don't think I'm good at singing. Even if I sang you a serenade, you wouldn't pay attention to me.

Or:

3. You don't think I'm good at singing. Even if I sing you a serenade, you won't pay me attention.


Do you mean to say that the person is now a liar, but you didn't think that would happen?

4. I didn't think you would become a liar. If I had listened to my friends' advice, I would have broken up with you.


And I don't think you typically need the "now", it's implied by the context:

5.If it's raining now, we ought to drive back to the movie theater.

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Sentence practice

1. The new semester starts in September. 
2. If you submitted your paper to the professor, you can get days off.
3. You don't think I am good at singing. If I sung you a serenade, you wouldn't even pay attention to me. 
4. I didn't think you had become a liar. If I had listened to my friends' advice, I would have broken up with you.
5.If it's raining, we should drive back to the movie theater.


you should write longer lengths of writings in one subject or write stories


:)

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