please help me to modify my self introduction!thank you!
I hope this self introduction will be more colloquial.
Last year, I organized a team to run a public welfare project, called ‘The home of international communication。
We helped foreign friends to find free accommodation whose owner hope to study the foreigner’s mother language by daily communication.
At the same time, I organized "to teach foreign friends to write calligraphy" and "William Castle cultural exchange party" and other activities。This project has developed my ability to think independently, to analyse and solve problems, and to develop my sense of responsibility and empathy.
I often ask myself, what can I do for my team members and how to give participants a more happy ,comfortable experience, and how to encourage Team members to be persistent.
In the practice, I planned and presided a number of entrepreneurial exchange activities, which gave me the ability to deal with unexpected problems under pressure.
When I was at a company called Metlife, I received an average of about 100 interviewees a week, which developed my friendly and enthusiastic service attitude。
My hobby is playing the piano. I began to learn the piano when I was 20 years old , many people told me it was too late and too difficult, But I think repeated fingering exercises is very interesting.
This hobby is very helpful for flight attendants
As far as I know, in a year, a flight attendant may repeat the same words a thousand times. Such as "Would you want a white wine or a red wine?"
Maybe a lot of people think this repetitive operation is very boring, but, because of my passion and love for this job, I can enjoy this process with a happy and joyful attitude.
Why do I like this job?
On the one hand, I am eager to communicate with friends from all over the world, to broaden the outlook anywhere in the world. And on the other hand, I think being an air hostess is not only a flight attendant, but also shoulders the responsibility for the safety of the passengers. This feeling makes me feel more love and respect for the job.
My English name is called Adelle, because it represents, kindness, consideration, emotional sensitivity, and can feel the needs of others. I believe that when I have the strength and determination, I can have the greatest potential, and I will work better.
I appreciate the opportunity to let me attend this interview. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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please help me to modify my self introduction!thank you!
I hope this self introduction will be more colloquial.Last year, I organized a team to manage a public welfare project called "The Home of International Communication"。
We helped foreigners
At that time, I also organized many events, such as "To Teach Foreign Friends to Write Calligraphy" and "William Castle Cultural Exchange Party".These project helped me to develop my ability to think independently, analysed and solved problems, and developed my sense of responsibility and empathy.
I often asked myself : What can I do for my team members ? How can I give the participants a more pleasant experience? How to encourage my team members so they stay motivated ?
To put it into practice, I planned and presided over a number of entrepreneurial exchange activities, and they have developed my ability to deal with unexpected problems under pressure.
When I was at a company called Metlife, I managed an average of about 100 interviewees a week, and these interviews have changed my natural disposition . I became more friendly and enthusiastic .
My hobby is playing the piano. I began to learn the piano when I was 20 years old . Many people told me that it was too late an age to start doing that and too difficult, but I think repeated fingering exercises is very interesting , whatever they say.
This training is very helpful for flight attendants
As far as I know, in a year, a flight attendant may repeat the same words a thousand times, such as "Would you want a white wine or a red wine?"
Maybe, a lot of people think this sort of repetition at work is very boring, but, with my passion and love for this job, I can still do these tasks with a happy and joyful attitude.
Why do I like this job?
On the one hand, I like to communicate with friends from all over the world and broaden my horizon . And on the other hand, I think being an air hostess is not just "a flight attendant". There is more to the job: we have to shoulder the responsibility for the safety of the passengers. This feeling makes me feel more love and respect for my job.
My English name is Adelle. It connotes kindness, consideration, emotional sensitivity, and a natural instinct to feel the needs of others. I believe that, when I have the strength and determination, I can achieve my true potential, and I will work better.
I appreciate the opportunity given to me to have this interview. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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