To outlast the night. Chapter two. We're in the danger
I couldn't believe my eyes... There were many disgusting creatures instead of people went from their houses...
...We were standing at the forest's edge staying on the safe distance from our native village.
"James! What's going on? How did you find out it?" I asked.
"Once in the morning I needed to fill my car (I'm not sure how needs to say this expression). The weather was rainy like now. So I drove to the gas station. When I left my car I saw suspicious people in the building of gas station. They looked like humans, but they behaved like... like... In other words that weren't humans. Their motions were fast and sharp."
"Did they talk?"
"Yes, they did. I didn't listen so I only can tell about their view and motions. Now then, I quickly left the gas station. In that night I couldn't to fall asleep for a long time trying to understand what happened. In the next morning I decided to watch for our village. I tried to spot every event in the village. Listen, better I'll tell you about that in detail later..."
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To outlast the night. Chapter two. We're in the danger ("we are in danger" would make more since for the chapter title)
I couldn't believe my eyes... There were many disgusting creatures instead of people coming from their houses......We were standing at the forest's edge staying a safe distance from our native village.
"James! What's going on? How did you find out?" I asked.
"In the morning I needed to fill up my car. The weather was rainy so I decided to drive to the gas station. When I left my car I saw suspicious people in the gas station. They looked like humans, but they behaved like... like... In other words they weren't humans. Their motions were fast and sharp."
"Did they talk?"
"Yes, they did. I didn't hear them so I can only tell you about what I saw. Now then, I quickly left the gas station. On that night I couldn't fall asleep for a long time I was trying to understand what had happened. In the morning I decided to watch our village. I tried to spot everything going on in the village. Listen, I'd better tell you about that in detail later..."
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