Sentiment
Everthing around me，except the thing I care about,is just the silhouette that cast on mirror.It has nothing to do with me ，transient and meaningless.It is no longer pleasing to me.Cherry blossoms of Japan，Aegean Sea of Greece，Taiwan's Sun Moon Lake，The London Eye of Great Britain，still engraving on my mind.
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Sentiment
Everthing around me except for the things I care about are just silhouettes cast on (the/a) mirror. It has nothing to do with me, it is transient and meaningless. It is no longer pleasing to me. The cherry blossoms in Japan, the Aegean Sea in Greece, the Sun Moon Lake in Taiwan, the London Eye in Great Britain are still engraved in my mind.0
Thank you for revise my prose.It is so kind of you!@Allison Charmaine
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