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My 'amazing' trip For this summer, my mother had booked a trip to Navarra and Barcelona. It was going to take a week. We were excited about it and we supposed it would be fantastic. However, one day, the washing machine crushed and it cost 200€ a new one. My mother thougth that that we wouldn't have enought money for the trip if we paid the washing machine, so we cancelled the trip and my mother booked another one. That new trip will take four days and we would go to Cadiz, that is nearer than Navarra. But things could go worst and, my mother had an accident with the car and we also had to repaired it. It cost 500€! We had to say good bye to the trip because God didn't want that we travel this summer.

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My "amazing" trip

For this summer, my mother had booked a trip to Navarra and Barcelona. It was going to take a week. We were excited about it and we supposed it would be fantastic.
However, one day, the washing machine crushed and it cost 200€ to buy a new one. My mother thought that that we wouldn't have enough money for the trip if we paid the washing machine, so we cancelled the trip and my mother booked another one. That new trip will take four days and we will go to Cadiz, which is closer than Navarra.
But things got worse and, my mother had an accident with the car and we had to repair it. It cost 500€! We had to say good bye to the trip because God didn't want us to travel this summer.

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My 'amazing' trip

For this summer, my mother had booked a trip to Navarra and Barcelona. It was going to take a week. We were excited about it and we supposed (you could also say hoped or knew instead of supposed) it would be fantastic.
However, one day, the washing machine crushed (better: died or broke) and it cost 200€ for a new one. My mother thougth that that we wouldn't have enought money for the trip if we paid for the washing machine, so we cancelled the trip and my mother booked another one. That new trip will take four days and we would go to Cadiz, that is nearer than Navarra.
But things could go worse and, my mother had an accident with the car and we also had to repaired it. It cost 500€! We had to say goodbye to the trip because God didn't want that we us to travel this summer.

Very nicely written Carmen.  I hope that your mother is okay following her car accident.  

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